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A Valentine Reprise

Hot passion ties hearts in tight knots
Its heat roasts with thousands of watts
Instead of the norm
Drop this love and feel warm
Consumed with lust for chocolàtes

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Charmaine Chircop

March 6, 2010 at 1:14 PM

Romantico..and sweet..Charma:)

Andrea Dietrich

February 23, 2010 at 6:51 AM

Yes, they do the trick as well. Except, they go to your fat cells. hahaha. Cute one. Hmmm, do you think they make diet licorce? Luv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

February 23, 2010 at 5:46 AM

that is my kind of passion

Sara Kendrick

February 22, 2010 at 6:28 AM

The humor here is great for I know the feeling of wanting that chocolate. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. The Haiku that you commented on was from a picture that Raul has in a contest. I just saw those rocks as pourous lava rock. Sara

Marty Owens

February 15, 2010 at 3:03 PM

I love this one...it's so funny to me...Marty

Debbie Guzzi

February 15, 2010 at 2:03 PM

so great I love the way the readers mind flits from one posibility to the next! Thanks for reading my verses! (The man hit the woman he went to confession but he still went to jail. What she did was supposed to be up to your mind. ;) Light & Love

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