A Valentine Plea

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Jan.28- 2024

Pick up Lines for a Valentine's Day Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Suzette Richards

Oh Lady, you make my head wobbly spin.
Don’t show such a harsh contemptuous grin.
I fall prostrate at your feet.
From you, expect a fair treat.
Your sole unshared love, can I ever win!

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Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 2/4/2024 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Dear Valsa. Witty and cute - your limerick is fun to read.

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/29/2024 12:44:00 PM

This is an adorable limerick dear Valsa and the picture accompanies it so well. Good for him for having a good try. Really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest. Hugs and blessings xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/29/2024 4:52:00 AM

Valsa, what a sweet and romantic (pick up line) A lovely take on the contest theme!! Happy Monday xxoo

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/29/2024 4:52:00 AM

Valsa, what a sweet and romantic (pick up line) A lovely take on the contest theme!! Happy Monday xxoo

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/29/2024 4:00:00 AM

great lines, dear Valsa. Soon we will be clustered with Valentine's poem. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/28/2024 10:51:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write/cute picture. Good Luck... Looks like we both did this one. Have a wonderful day/week................

Ink Empress

Date: 1/28/2024 7:47:00 AM

Awwn this is so cute and definitely anyone would fall for those romantic lines that youv delivered in the most soul hitting manner, creating a very dramatic voice that emanates infatuation in eloquence. Lol dont they always make us feel like our head is spinning oh well honeymoon period, butterflies and rainbows! Love this limerick. So light hearted and cute! Pleasure reading your work. BOL

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/28/2024 5:49:00 AM

Oh my, this is such a creative limerick dear poetess.. That first line really gave me a good laugh, hahaa.. You've a great side for humor as well, you should really write more such poems! I absolutely like how you've created that the lady shows supremacy in her aura, whilst the beloved is trying to gain her eternal love.. Very well crafted for the contest and I must say, you've chosen the theme nicely.. Enjoyed reading this, sending you many best wishes and light always :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/28/2024 3:43:00 AM

He can only but try Valsa, he stands a better chance if he's armed with chocolate and flowers. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom