Premiere Contest WinnerA Valentine Party --Free Love

Invitation to a Valentine Bash

(Direction to the Venue)

I live on the Heartland Estate
across from the Elysian Fields,
At the corner of Lovers Lane
and Pure Passion Boulevard
in the town of Romeoville.

If you are taking a midnight train
Get down at the Juliet Junction;
Catch a bus to the Break-heart pass
and get off at the Harem Heights stop.
You'll reach my Pleasure Palace
before the break of day.

Flying of course is not advised
as it is impossible to dodge Cupid's arrows!
But if you are planning to drive,
Take the highway to Elysium.
You might have to stay
overnight at the Erotica Inn,
famous for sensual simulator kiosks.
After some luscious nibbling
at the Casanova Cafe,
You'll arrive before lunch
at my enchanting Chateau.

Bring your lust luggage,
Loads of love potion
and lots of charm.
Running amuck is strictly prohibited.
There will be plenty of time
to cuddle and coo
at the Pleasure Point hill,
Loll in a pool of honey and wine
and soak in the sensual glow
of a bohemian moon.

RSVP: A week shy of Valentine's Day
Or, please call 666-PASSION.



~12/25/16
for Mystic Rose contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Bennett Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 9:44 PM
Oohh--Lala--LOVE IT !! ~~~Jeanie ~~~
Inman Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 10:44 PM
Very nice Abdul, enticingly seductive.
Mandani Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 1:44 PM
Well, you caught the breeze! Thanks.
Devonshire Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:26 AM
Very nice use of humor in this poem, Abdul. Enjoyed very much. Congratulations on taking first place!
Mandani Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 1:43 PM
Thanks Carolyn.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:05 AM
Thanks, won't miss it..in hurry to book my ticket!:D :D
Mandani Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 1:42 PM
Super!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 3:41 AM
Humorous and entertaining indeed! Well deserved trophy. Congrats.:)
Mandani Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 10:44 AM
Thanks Sunita. By the way, you are invited to the party! lol
Nusker Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 10:10 PM
This is absolutely marvelous. I loved it thoroughly. Congratulations on your trophy win, first place. A 7 & a fav.
Mandani Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 10:43 AM
Thanks Afzal. Appreciate your comment.
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