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A Unusual Place

Where the ground meets the sky And I’m looking at a place Filled with palm trees an Every house is blue in color With a variety of large Butterflies attached Out front there’s a light Blue brick road, that Looks like glass and it Shines so brightly Underneath, is the ocean You can look down and See the marine life Swimming around

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Date: 5/4/2021 5:04:00 PM
Great job on a 4th place finish! Sorry it took forever to judge...loved your economy of words. Tightly written, though popping with vibrant imagery.
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Daisy Ward
Date: 5/7/2021 9:33:00 AM
thank-you very much.

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