A Unicorn Spell

Opening wings spreading out
one pure beautiful image in beholding 
Gracefully embracing inside visions 
greeting Mother of pearl shimmering rainbow hues
Her horn sparkling tipped diamond 
Under the moonlight silver gleams 
Her silhouette reflecting light 
Princess wearing golden horse shoes 
One mane in softest satin silk 
Regally standing mustang wild 

Magically colored purest washed from the ocean foam 
Cascading hair scenting of burnt honey 
Eyes penetrating in baby blue awakening 
Her long lush lashes flutter and glisten 
Upon her lips last rosebud's dew 
Her coat in white like slushy snowflakes 
reflecting glass shards of crescent cradles
She roams the fields singing to the prince
it is only love that will finally set her free 
from a curse cast on her beauty 
by an evil wizard 

To be the only winged unicorn 
of it's kind in the world 
flying into softest cushioned clouds 
She dances and sings,then she stills 
In distance she listens to the sound of a flute 
And there She sees a gorgeous young man 
lying on carpets of evergreen 
along with his father,and mother the queen 
Her melodic voice like that of a jeweled string harp
hypnotised the prince 
He ran and ran after pink butterflies which led the way 
They took him to her 
They glide above them 
then to the promising celestial sky 
they flew away baby blue 
infinite their love. 

As if He knew her in another lifetime sweetly
His eyes where glued. Into her own 
He knew he loved her and had to hold her 
Never to leave him all by himself 
regally standing mustang white

His eyes were fixed into hers... 
To her he went with joyful tears 
His lips brushed smoothly her every fears 
As then he whispered behind her ears 
You are a unicorn and I'm a man 
but with no other my.heart will share 
I ll make you mine if you say yes 
The first winged unicorn as a princess 
Then he kissed her upon her neck 
and a strong wind just pushed him back 
From a white horse. ,fair lady She 
had now won over her destiny 
The prince's lips removed the curse 
Now she is his ,as he is hers 

Overflowing his heart 
in sweeping golden joy 
forever on deep sands 
living always together 
in everlasting happiness

written by Liam and Charmaine 
a fun write dear friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/30/2016 11:18:00 AM
This appeared in the Best Romantic category. Truly a cathartic write to get over unhappy thoughts
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Date: 11/10/2014 6:12:00 AM
Liam and Charmaine, You have created a tapestry of touching images—together with a charming story line—that is nothing short of stunning. Bravo!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/13/2014 8:39:00 AM
thank you paul your a pal wonderful comment heartfelt deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 11/3/2014 10:29:00 PM
Fabulous and tender meeting of this fair unicorn, very loving, Liam and Charmaine, you do a nice co-write
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/4/2014 1:28:00 AM
thank you sheri deeply beautiful comment it was a fun write bless you
Date: 11/3/2014 1:35:00 PM
I will browse through them shortly fella ....mine might be a little dark for you ...i hope you find one or two entertaining have a great evening..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/3/2014 1:59:00 PM
no peter i have dark ones also devil woman ha ha seaweed monster got loads of dark ones pal must check a few more of yours out
Date: 11/3/2014 1:18:00 PM
Have fave saved this one Liam ....my little girl will love this one....Horses Unicorns and horses her true passion...cheers mate!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/3/2014 1:31:00 PM
oh i have quite a few like this peter for your little one [always a dream ]is a fairy who meets a leprechaun smiling the irish in me ha ha great seeing you again pal heartfelt
Date: 10/28/2014 10:53:00 PM
Beautiful poem Liam and Charmaine, I love stories like this and I love unicorns it could have stayed as a unicorn but I did like the outcome :) eve
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/29/2014 3:02:00 AM
thank you ever so much eve truly amazing beautiful heartfelt comment glad you liked the outcome smiling bless you dear friend
Date: 10/24/2014 10:21:00 AM
Though it's a fun write but a dream like. Beautifully pictured. Congratulation for featuring your poem of the day. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 11:21:00 AM
thank you dear friend for the kind and very beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 10/24/2014 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem of the day Liam. The two of you did a marvelous job.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/24/2014 11:18:00 AM
thank you so kindly brenda bless you dear friend
Date: 10/23/2014 8:04:00 PM
You couldn't have chosen a more beautiful soul for this collaboration than charming Charmaine! The two of you are a winning combination! Cheers to you and love to Charmaine! XXX
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 8:15:00 PM
aah jack so sweet of you dear friend dazzling comment dear friend bless you pal
Date: 10/23/2014 5:50:00 PM
Beautifully done; I love the unicorn imagery here; such a wonderful poem.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 5:58:00 PM
thank you so kindly for the truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 10/23/2014 4:00:00 PM
Beautiful, sweet and delicious...Good work...I loved it...Best to you...
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 4:19:00 PM
ah thank you for the sweet very beautiful comment bless you dear friend
Date: 10/23/2014 12:53:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 1:23:00 PM
danitra thank you so very kindly wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 10/23/2014 10:54:00 AM
Liam and Charma, Congratulations to the both of you on a job extraordinarily well-done!! I thought you guys had a winner here when I reviewed your poem last night. And the topic you chose to write on was just perfect in every respect. My wife loves Unicorns as a fairy tale theme. I will make sure she reads your poem here. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 12:05:00 PM
cheers pal truly wonderful comment just blew me away i hope your wife enjoys it quite magical smiling you just brightened up my day bless you pal
Date: 10/23/2014 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations ... not only on being chosen POD, but for this excellent co-write in which both your styles intermingled so well....a fount of creativity! Well done. // paul
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 9:40:00 AM
yeah it sure is paul smiling thank you kindly for your very beautiful comment heartfelt dear friend deeply appreciated
Date: 10/23/2014 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations to both of you on being chosen for poem of the day! Bravo!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 9:43:00 AM
richard dear friend thank you touching deeply wonderful smiling bless you
Date: 10/23/2014 6:28:00 AM
An exceptional collaboration from two respected poets. Congratulations on being chose poem with this fine write.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 9:45:00 AM
maurice dear friend always a pleasure seeing you heart touching beautiful comment warmly thank you pal
Date: 10/23/2014 6:07:00 AM
What a simply glorious collaboration - may congrats on poem of the day! hugs Jan xxx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 9:49:00 AM
do you know jan dear friend i needed this to cheer me up really made me feel something just dreaming alone this really made me smile thank you kindly
Date: 10/23/2014 5:15:00 AM
Congratulations you two on being selected "poem of the day" A very creative and moving read! Please comment on my poem "torrent of bells" Many thx!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 9:51:00 AM
thank you suzanne smiling yeah i will have a look at your piece wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 10/23/2014 4:00:00 AM
Congrats you two on this beauty....hugs and cheers
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 9:53:00 AM
smiling tim wonderful comment thank you kindly dear friend bless you
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 9:02:00 AM
we done a great job charmaine this brought a smile to my face as i was really down doing this it took me away from all those faces sad who hate take them into a magical land as i do not have that face it helped me escape i got my answer today in this i cried behind the curtains sad how much someone can hurt a friend bless you dear friend smiling true friend
Date: 10/23/2014 3:40:00 AM
Congrats on the poem of the day Liam.Your striking lines and creative mind deserves it.Thankyou tps : )
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/23/2014 11:10:00 AM
Its ok Lian...It was my pleasure and am glad to feel you snile now.Leave sad faces for the sad.Life is beautiful.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 9:03:00 AM
oh charmaine you answer jumped up top so sorry
Date: 10/23/2014 3:26:00 AM
gorgeous pen dear friend a wonderful story of love hugs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 8:33:00 AM
thank you linda dear friend lovely to see you pal bless you wonderful comment
Date: 10/23/2014 2:36:00 AM
Congrats Liam and Charmaine on poem of the day. You deserve it. Well done "B"
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 2:59:00 AM
thank you dear friend for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated bless you
Date: 10/23/2014 2:28:00 AM
- A fantastic "fairy tale" poem, with many sweet items! - Very well done from both of you - Congratulations on today's poem, really well deserved - I enjoy reading! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) (7!!!!)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 3:06:00 AM
anne lise thank you dear friend for the sweet very beautiful comment thank you kindly heartfelt appreciated bless you pal
Date: 10/22/2014 8:44:00 PM
Liam and Charmaine . . . This one's a 7++ in my book. The theme, the imagery, the tone, the words and the narrative interaction are all perfect and the results of your collaboration is a quite wonder piece here about The Unicorn and the mystery surrounding the spell. Quite extraordinary and most artfully done. The alliteration you've employed with many of the words only helps to dynamically highlight the narrative. My wife and I really like the legend of The Unicorn. Brilliant ending!! Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/23/2014 3:19:00 AM
ah gary your so sweet dear friend this story i have wanted to co write for some time and charmaine drew such magic there was an awful storm during us writing this gale force winds it kept cutting off thank you charmaine for bearing with me on this thank you kindly pal and say thank you from me to your beautiful wife heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 10/22/2014 4:10:00 PM
oh wow, what a visual delight. This is fantasy at its best and with Charma, you can't go wrong!!! Charma is sure busy writing these days!!!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/22/2014 4:15:00 PM
dazzling beautiful comment andrea thank you for such kindness truly heartfelt bless you
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