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A twilight melody

Roar of the wind racing in a seeming halt.
A sudden rainstorm it is.
A salutation farewell to a mournful of two hearts,
Which formerly fused with love and cherish.

All the trees shed their leaves.
As they feel canticles of the broken hearted.
Sing delighted now is the devil,
For he sees another soul to seduced.

Shortly afterward in time to come,
There were a lover lying lifeless.
Covered with the golden leaves of ferns.
An evening, with poems and songs and death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 6/23/2013 6:29:00 AM
Good morning, Shirley congratulations with having your poem featured on the soups home page. Take care and enjoy the coming week. ~XOX~ *LIND
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Shirley Candy
Date: 6/23/2013 8:29:00 AM
Thank you..have a great week ahead too, Linda :))
Date: 6/21/2013 11:17:00 AM
Hugely massive lines! Ah, the power of nocturnal conundrums. Excellent!
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Date: 6/23/2013 8:30:00 AM
Thanks for the kind review, Drake..sweet as always.. *hug*
Date: 6/10/2013 8:17:00 PM
wow! Shirley, your poem is deep, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/10/2013 11:06:00 PM
Thank you for your warm welcome. I enjoy being a part of this community. And having new friends surely bring me joys..! ^__^
Date: 6/9/2013 9:37:00 PM
Your poem is deep and descriptive. Shirley, a wonderful poem to read Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 6/10/2013 11:36:00 AM
Thank you for your warm welcome, Linda. Very appreciate it. I'm glad I found this site. I love the atmosphere of the community. Of course I would like you to give your honest feedback on my poems. That would be very pleasant for having such a good poet like you commented on my poems. *hug*