Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

A Twenty-Seven Hour Day

Wonder if I ask politely, the great powers that be
To increase the day's hours by just two or three
Not asking for much
My heart would be touched
Right now there's not even time to stop for a pee

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Tim Smith October 26, 2016 at 12:00 PM If there were extra hours I might...sleep all the way through the night...watch the sun at dawn...with out any yawn...and in my skivvies give the ladies a fright Jack Ellison October 27, 2016 at 7:33 AM "Skivvies" lol Haven't heard that for a while!!!

Daniel Turner October 26, 2016 at 8:14 AM Tim moonlights as father time, ask him for a couple more chimes, I know what he'll say, it's a long enough day, Pee in your pants it's no crime Jack Ellison October 26, 2016 at 8:18 AM "Pee in your pants it's no crime"... uncomfortable but no crime! lol Maybe DEPENDS is the answer!!!

Lim'Rik Flats October 26, 2016 at 7:43 AM Hmmm...seems the opposite of me//seems all I ever do is pee//if I had time//I'd write some rhyme//but I gotta go pee some coffee!!! ROCK ON JACKSON!!! (btw.are those cubbies related to the jays? Are they gonna break Tim's heart?) Tim Smith October 26, 2016 at 11:56 AM Even though they're part of my town...I wont be sportin neary a frown...my heart only beats...in white stocking seats...when listening to Andy the clown Jack Ellison October 26, 2016 at 8:10 AM Since 1908!!!! Unbelievable! I'm pulling for them... it's gotta be their year!!!! Me and Tim should have enough influence to make the baseball gods end this DROUGHT!!! Cheers Jackson! xo