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A Twenty-Seven Hour Day

Wonder if I ask politely, the great powers that be
To increase the day's hours by just two or three
Not asking for much
My heart would be touched
Right now there's no time to stop for a pee


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

June 8, 2015 at 8:54 PM

Wouldn't that be just sooo nice! Always cherish your creative thoughts my dear friend Jack! Love always, Laura

Jack Ellison

June 8, 2015 at 9:01 PM

I would spend those extra three hours thinking of my dearest sweet friend Laura! Thank you for your loving words and your many visits once more! You are oh so special to me! You have no idea how much I love forward to your kind beautiful words! I love you beyond words my dear dear Laura! Jack xxx

Carol Eastman

May 30, 2015 at 10:07 AM

Oh my! I look forward to my bed time... I'd hate to have to wait any longer to find it... With 27 hours and my luck... I'd probably fall asleep a couple hours earlier and miss a whole lot more!

Jack Ellison

May 30, 2015 at 12:39 PM

But there's so much still to do!!!! Huggsies, Jack xxx

Andrea Dietrich

May 30, 2015 at 1:39 AM

yes, yes, I really believe in THIS one. I need MORE hours in my play time of the day!!!

Jack Ellison

May 30, 2015 at 5:23 AM

Play time is most important! Poetry Soup is definitely play/fun time for me talking to all you sweet people! Love, Jack xxx

Judy Konos

May 29, 2015 at 7:59 PM

Jack now you know that HE is all knowing! How then can you not find the time to stop for a weedle given a full 24 hours? HE even extended you the courtesy of not having to squat? You have heard of doodly squat well this is weedle squat! Bye

Jack Ellison

May 30, 2015 at 5:21 AM

You are my kind of friend, dear Judith! Full of exciting alternatives to my dull life!!! LOL Love ya dear Judy! xxxx

Tim Smith

May 29, 2015 at 8:52 AM

I could definitely need it for sleep....great idea

Jack Ellison

May 30, 2015 at 5:16 AM

I was kinda referring to have more time for stuff! Sleep wasn't on my list!!! But whatever... LOL

Neva Romaine

May 29, 2015 at 8:40 AM

Hey Jack, this is too cute. But I don't know, it sounds like you'll just fill up the extra hours with more things to do - and it's your bladder I feel sorry for! Well done. Be Blessed, Neva

Jack Ellison

May 29, 2015 at 8:51 AM

You are most likely right my dear Neva! If I got my wish, I would probably negotiate for 3 more and 3 more then 3 more!!! Huggsies, Jack xxx