Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

A Twenty-Seven Hour Day

Wonder if I ask politely, the great powers that be
Would increase the day's hours by just two or three
Not asking for much
My heart would be touched
Right now there's not even time to stop for a pee

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Tom Cunningham April 27, 2020 at 9:54 AM Best they can offer is an extra day every four years, but you can only but ask. Good day Sir Jack Tom Jack Ellison April 27, 2020 at 9:58 AM My question is who do I ask... maybe Trump!!! LOL :(

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 27, 2020 at 7:38 AM What? No relaxing retirement for you? Or does wifey have you too busy? The days are still getting longer, guess you're missing sleep then ;), Good morning hugs! Have another coffee ~x Jack Ellison April 27, 2020 at 8:11 AM BTW just to confirm... you are the best thing that's happened to me since sliced bread!!! Seriously... this old dude has a major crush on you!!!!!!!! XOX Jack Ellison April 27, 2020 at 7:52 AM Opposite to popular belief, old people strain to get in and out of their LazyBoy!!! Looked outside... not a cloud in the sky... ooooeeee! Good morning my sweet! XOX