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A Trying Moment

He just wouldn’t come a moment too soon as she waits eagerly by the light of the moon with passion that would make a man swoon lolling languorously in the moonlit lagoon. ~04/16/17 ~Form M - Monorhyme contest by Broken Wings

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Date: 4/22/2017 7:04:00 PM
Nicely written , Abdul, congratulations on your win. ~*
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Date: 4/20/2017 2:29:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this wonderful Monorhyme.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 4/22/2017 10:51:00 AM
Thanks a lot.
Date: 4/20/2017 2:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Abdul, great monorhyme.
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Date: 4/19/2017 8:00:00 AM
Hi Abdul, Congratulations on your fine win. It was most definitely well deserved. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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