Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Monorhyme

A Trying Moment

He just wouldn’t come a moment too soon
as she waits eagerly by the light of the moon
with passion that would make a man swoon
lolling languorously in the moonlit lagoon. 


~04/16/17
~Form M - Monorhyme contest by Broken Wings

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Eve Roper April 22, 2017 at 7:04 PM Nicely written , Abdul, congratulations on your win. ~*

Roy Pett April 20, 2017 at 2:32 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Abdul, great monorhyme.

Alexis Y. April 19, 2017 at 8:00 AM Hi Abdul, Congratulations on your fine win. It was most definitely well deserved. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis