A True Freaks Fairytale

so now the little children,
all come falling down,
across the london bridges,
we all see mary frown,

her lovley little sheep,
she keeps calling back,
but it wanders among wolves,
with eyes of hungry black,

jack and jill were dizzy,
from falling into the well,
they both grew into monsters,
who rule this fairy hell....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/30/2012 5:48:00 PM
i really really really really really really really really really really love this one becs :P
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Date: 7/13/2012 6:26:00 AM
Wow where did this week go? I am reading some amazing poetry this morning. It was a pleasure to read yours and I thank you for sharing it Jezabella. Have a great weekend and I will be back Monday to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2012 5:13:00 PM
hahaha,the tortoise and the hare,grew to be quite a scare,monsters in this fairy world,only jack and jill they fear,great write Jezabella love it
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Date: 7/12/2012 2:28:00 PM
‡ Poor Little Pumpkin Left Alone In His Patch, With Teary Eyes But He Won't Cry, Because, He Still Has A Slice Of His Momma's Cherry Pie, MmM MmM MmM * Kool Poe & I Love The Blue Vein Train, Sweet Beautiful Jezabella, Underlying The Belly Of This Whale's Cinderella Fairytale, Well, Dressed In Black & Momma's Coming Back With Some More Of That, 'Sweeet,' Cherry Pie * Haha, Luv, Rachel ‡
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