A Trip Too Far

Young and in my late teens,
I took my first trip afar,
I landed in Hawaii,
And went out to a bar.

I certainly had fun,
Until the next day,
When I had a tour booked,
To fly across Hanama bay.

We landed at a small air strip,
Isolated out in a country field,
We flew in groups on six seater planes,
Suddenly I felt my fate was sealed.

Then we moved onto a big tour bus,
Waves of stomach cramps began to spread,
My head spun, my teeth clenched,
I thought I was close to dead 

While 50 other people got on the bus,
I quietly asked the driver “if there was a bathroom on board?”
He shook his head from side to side, 
Then he drove on ahead and I was ignored.

He drove across the field and up to a big hanger,
And announced over his big, loud microphone,
“We are here for the lady that needs the bathroom”
And I got off the bus, head bowed and all alone!




Written July 13, 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/28/2011 11:32:00 AM
There are times when you just want to be another face in the crowd. Funny. Vince
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Date: 7/26/2011 8:25:00 AM
wow that must have been embarassing! Light & Love
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Date: 7/24/2011 8:46:00 PM
Now THAT's an embarrassing moment. hahaha. geeez. you should read my "potent urge. go gotta gotta go right now" thanks for your comment today.Luv, andrea
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Date: 7/22/2011 8:53:00 AM
An embarrassing moment, but at least you got over it and can doubtless laugh about it now. Interesting tale, told with style! Regards, Robert.
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Date: 7/14/2011 9:26:00 PM
Wow, I can relate! I've been there! Great poem!
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/14/2011 10:56:00 PM
thanks so much Laura, i appreciate your comments. Lee
Date: 7/14/2011 9:25:00 PM
Wow, I can relate! I've been there! Great poem!
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Date: 7/13/2011 4:53:00 AM
Ha, gotta love when someone calls you out in public and in front of everyone. Nice story. ~Chris Matt
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Lee Ramage
Date: 7/13/2011 5:01:00 AM
Thanks for the feedback... life's most embarassing moments. Lee
Date: 7/13/2011 4:53:00 AM
Ha, gotta love when someone calls you out in public and in front of everyone. Nice story. ~Chris Matt
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