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A Triad of Tanka VI: Autumn Failing

A cracked, lone brown leaf

Spiralling quickly downwards

Knows only the ground;

But in that motion exalts 

As if a plunging falcon.
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Fallen, wind-blown leaves

Huddling against grey kerbstones

In abject neglect.

Already parks quieter...

Their iron railings more stark.
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The thick sap retreats

When gnarled bark tightens its grip

On inner heartwood;

Summer faded into nights...

Autumn, failing, covered all.

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Date: 8/22/2025 4:41:00 PM
"...as if a plunging falcon" Awesome phrase! Perfect image/description. The last verse is my favorite....wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
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John Fleming
Date: 8/23/2025 3:51:00 PM
Thanks, Sara. Its the only one I have not altered since I uploaded them. Think I will leave it that way. :) john

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