John Fleming Poet Tanka

A Triad of Tanka IIII: Mount Fuji

Mount Fuji, waking,

Lifting on girdling pink cloud

In early dawning,

Casts its slopes and snowcapped peak

On flat mirroring water. 
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Fuji; slow sunrise.

Then a sea of blazing cloud 

Sets the hills aflame!

Crowding onto a shoreline:-

Hosts of purple lavender.
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Fuji in Moonshine;

Floating cranberries, amassed,

Shiver in cold light.

Ruby redness contrasting

Against crystaline night sky.

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Brenda Chiri December 2, 2025 at 10:19 PM And again with those “magical words” again! What spell is it you cast upon me my dear as you whisk me away in the stories you tell! Come read these to me;) loved it John another favorite of mine!;) John Fleming December 6, 2025 at 4:29 PM I will read to you again, Brenda Lee. Sometime in the New Year when the World takes a well needed breather and steps back in quiet reflection...I will read you some more poetry. With great affection. john :)

Valsa George August 24, 2025 at 9:27 PM Mount Fuji is one of my most adored of mountains. I have painted a beautiful drawing of Mount Fuji, which adores my drawing room. Your description is fantastic, dear John. I love all the three tankas, especially the last one. John Fleming August 31, 2025 at 3:12 PM Thanks, Valsa. Yes indeed...Mount Fuji and the surrounding areas will continue to be an inspiration for all artists and writers for ever and a day. Amazing beauty! :) john

Deb M August 21, 2025 at 3:34 AM I love this poem John…..such wonderful imagery and description which brings the poem to life! Excellent…Debx John Fleming August 22, 2025 at 3:17 PM I am pleased you enjoyed the read, Deb. Thank you for your generous remarks - greatly appreciated! :) john

Victor Buhagiar August 21, 2025 at 1:59 AM This is where I have to admit I know very little of Fuji and I never wrote a tanka. Still I loved your trio of poems. John Fleming August 21, 2025 at 3:03 AM Thank you, Victor. Your kind words and support are much appreciated. Cheers! :) john

Mystic Rose Rose August 20, 2025 at 3:13 PM is this for a contest ? John Fleming August 21, 2025 at 3:01 AM Now there's a thought, Rose. It never occurred to me that I could submit it, at sometime perhaps, as such. Hmmm...something to consider. Many thanks, Rose! :) john

Mystic Rose Rose August 20, 2025 at 3:12 PM You seem to bring each line to life with color and beauty John, well written pieces :) John Fleming August 21, 2025 at 2:57 AM Thank you, Rose! :) john

Sotto Poet August 20, 2025 at 8:33 AM You possess a remarkable gift, John. These tankas, in soft embrace, intricately weave their narratives, exquisitely interconnected and linked. Nice Job John Fleming August 20, 2025 at 12:44 PM High praise that indeed coming from you yourself, S.P. Your three Tankas literally took my breath away. Many thanks! :) john

sara Etgen-Baker August 19, 2025 at 5:23 PM loved how these three verses delicately entwined and related. A beautiful skill you have. have a splendid evening, Sara John Fleming August 20, 2025 at 12:40 PM Thank you most kindly, Sara. You are very kind. :) john