A Tree In the Dark
Mottled Earthen tints:
leaves of a deep dark ruby,
light lavender,
golden hickory.
Uplifted skeleton faces,
buried together,
onyx hues on the bones-
the waxing of Winter moons.
War in the distance.
is better.
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