Andrea Dietrich Poet Haiku

A Treasure Trove Found

a blazing red sky
romance whispered on the wind. . . .
our island retreat

strolling hand in hand
along a secluded strand. . . . 
the brink of passion

as long sun-warmed waves
crash against the ocean’s edge. . . . 
we fall to the sand

blissful on the beach
true feelings at last revealed. . . . 
a treasure trove found

Written by Andrea Dietrich
for the "Treasure Trove" Poetry Contest
of  Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

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Skat A May 16, 2015 at 11:19 AM wonderful Andrea. love the ku

Gautami Phookan March 17, 2012 at 11:53 AM Awww so sweet Andrea.. and liked how you began this with 'a blazing red sky'.. With all these contests we all seem to be writing a lot on the theme of 'ROMANCE' :) Congrats on your big win. Love..

Maureen Lefanue March 16, 2012 at 12:33 AM Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Great poem! Love, Maureen

Carol Sunshine Brown March 15, 2012 at 12:01 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Treasure Trove" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson March 14, 2012 at 3:39 PM Nice romantic story. Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor March 14, 2012 at 9:42 AM Congrats on your win, Andrea. Excellent. Nice going, my friend. hugs, Ralph

Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2012 at 3:58 AM Send you a congrats for your win. - oxox Anne-Lise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 13, 2012 at 8:42 PM congrats Andrea on sweet success for this wonderful write so sumptuous.. luv.. thankxx for supporting..

Judy Ball March 8, 2012 at 8:29 AM WoW! Good one! Good imagery and a really unique take on the subject. Should be a winer. Good luck and thanks so much for your review of my "Treasure Trove." Just made up for the contest. God Bless, JB

Phyllis Babcock March 3, 2012 at 5:24 PM Now romance and you can hear me sigh. This is the kind of scene that I like that I can see. love phyl

Harry Horsman March 1, 2012 at 5:40 AM Linda will just love these, i know i do. harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 1, 2012 at 12:20 AM Well now I am wishing I am at a beach! This made me smile and I love how you did it in haiku-- I could just picture this one so well :D awesome way to take on "treasure trove"-- hugs to you!

Robert Johnson February 28, 2012 at 3:15 PM I could use some of those long sun-warmed waves to thaw out these sleet drenched legs. I want to live in your poems.

Jack Horne February 28, 2012 at 1:27 PM What a beautiful romantic piece, Andrea

Daver Austin February 28, 2012 at 12:33 PM In the background is playing, "Love is a Many Splendored Thing. Be still pacemaker baby! A sure winner, Andrea. LOve, daver

Harry Horsman February 28, 2012 at 8:15 AM love these wonderful romantic poems, you write, must be spring time where you are? love this. harry

Kash Poet February 27, 2012 at 9:15 PM Hi,at 12 midnight,the short hand is under the big hand and so can't be seen.

Poet Destroyer A February 27, 2012 at 8:41 PM ha ha.. a balzing red sky... I have used that line in a poem... i like the way you used it better...Andrea, the other day.. you mentioned that i have not had anything new... nope... i truly don't write as much.. cause nathan, says...my writing is not as good as back than.. well anyways...i just posted a free falling poem.. ha ha..my style... if you have time go read it..always..pd

Jancarl Campi February 27, 2012 at 8:40 PM THis poem sounds like a winner to me. Good luck!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 27, 2012 at 8:37 PM thankxx for supporting my contest Andrea.. good luck luv.. cannot wait to read at judging time..

Kash Poet February 27, 2012 at 7:59 PM This is so romantic Andrea with beautiful imagery.Best wishes.Read my Bunny Tale.Billy Bob returned to his mama.

Doris Culverhouse February 27, 2012 at 6:23 PM soupmail...nice work as usual!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 27, 2012 at 5:23 PM The ideal image of romance and passion. A beautiful set of haiku. I want to be on that island! Blessings, Rhonda

Russell Sivey February 27, 2012 at 4:24 PM Wow this is a spectacular write my friend! I thoroughly enjoy your fabulous poem about a great excursion out to a perfect retreat! Somewhere I would love to go to myself, a true treasure trove! I loved your comment on my pussywillow poem, very funny! Great Work!!

Dan Kearley February 27, 2012 at 4:09 PM Very nice!!!I could feel it. :o)

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