A Treasure Trove Found

a blazing red sky romance whispered on the wind. . . . our island retreat strolling hand in hand along a secluded strand. . . . the brink of passion as long sun-warmed waves crash against the ocean’s edge. . . . we fall to the sand blissful on the beach true feelings at last revealed. . . . a treasure trove found Written by Andrea Dietrich for the "Treasure Trove" Poetry Contest of Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/16/2015 11:19:00 AM
wonderful Andrea. love the ku
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Date: 3/17/2012 11:53:00 AM
Awww so sweet Andrea.. and liked how you began this with 'a blazing red sky'.. With all these contests we all seem to be writing a lot on the theme of 'ROMANCE' :) Congrats on your big win. Love..
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Date: 3/16/2012 12:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Great poem! Love, Maureen
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Date: 3/15/2012 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Treasure Trove" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2012 3:39:00 PM
Nice romantic story. Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/14/2012 9:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Excellent. Nice going, my friend. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/14/2012 3:58:00 AM
Send you a congrats for your win. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/13/2012 8:42:00 PM
congrats Andrea on sweet success for this wonderful write so sumptuous.. luv.. thankxx for supporting..
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Date: 3/8/2012 8:29:00 AM
WoW! Good one! Good imagery and a really unique take on the subject. Should be a winer. Good luck and thanks so much for your review of my "Treasure Trove." Just made up for the contest. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/3/2012 5:24:00 PM
Now romance and you can hear me sigh. This is the kind of scene that I like that I can see. love phyl
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Date: 3/1/2012 5:40:00 AM
Linda will just love these, i know i do. harry
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Date: 3/1/2012 12:20:00 AM
Well now I am wishing I am at a beach! This made me smile and I love how you did it in haiku-- I could just picture this one so well :D awesome way to take on "treasure trove"-- hugs to you!
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Date: 2/28/2012 3:15:00 PM
I could use some of those long sun-warmed waves to thaw out these sleet drenched legs. I want to live in your poems.
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Date: 2/28/2012 1:27:00 PM
What a beautiful romantic piece, Andrea
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Date: 2/28/2012 12:33:00 PM
In the background is playing, "Love is a Many Splendored Thing. Be still pacemaker baby! A sure winner, Andrea. LOve, daver
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Date: 2/28/2012 8:15:00 AM
love these wonderful romantic poems, you write, must be spring time where you are? love this. harry
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Date: 2/27/2012 9:15:00 PM
Hi,at 12 midnight,the short hand is under the big hand and so can't be seen.
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Date: 2/27/2012 8:41:00 PM
ha ha.. a balzing red sky... I have used that line in a poem... i like the way you used it better...Andrea, the other day.. you mentioned that i have not had anything new... nope... i truly don't write as much.. cause nathan, says...my writing is not as good as back than.. well anyways...i just posted a free falling poem.. ha ha..my style... if you have time go read it..always..pd
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Date: 2/27/2012 8:40:00 PM
THis poem sounds like a winner to me. Good luck!!!
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Date: 2/27/2012 8:37:00 PM
thankxx for supporting my contest Andrea.. good luck luv.. cannot wait to read at judging time..
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Date: 2/27/2012 7:59:00 PM
This is so romantic Andrea with beautiful imagery.Best wishes.Read my Bunny Tale.Billy Bob returned to his mama.
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Date: 2/27/2012 6:23:00 PM
soupmail...nice work as usual!
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:23:00 PM
The ideal image of romance and passion. A beautiful set of haiku. I want to be on that island! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/27/2012 4:24:00 PM
Wow this is a spectacular write my friend! I thoroughly enjoy your fabulous poem about a great excursion out to a perfect retreat! Somewhere I would love to go to myself, a true treasure trove! I loved your comment on my pussywillow poem, very funny! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/27/2012 4:09:00 PM
Very nice!!!I could feel it. :o)
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