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A Treasure Concealed

Smoky puffy clouds hovered around Pungent waves engulfed thy existence Plummeting gullible hopes to ground Troubled waters obscured persistence. Exploding, unnerving, dark remorse Glanced for an anchor to float away Behold the dazzling ripe inward source Auspiciously holding thee at bay. Hath saved all years those memories loved Nourished thy soul and dissolved in thee Wrapped by thy mother and beloved Fear not, unshackle that warmth, foresee! Love of all had been thy pious bridge Cross over! Treasured faith holds that ridge. May 12, 2020 Bridge over troubled waters Poetry Contest Sponsored By John Hamilton Winner: Third Place

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/21/2020 3:19:00 PM

This sonnet is outstanding Aditi! Congratulations on your win! blessings xxoo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/21/2020 4:07:00 PM

Thank you so much for your appreciation and blessings Connie :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/21/2020 8:54:00 AM

Lovely sonnet, Aditi. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/21/2020 9:00:00 AM

Thank you so much Janice :)

John Gondolf

Date: 5/21/2020 8:02:00 AM

A beautifully written sonnet, Aditi, congrats on your win. John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/21/2020 8:28:00 AM

Thank you for your kind wishes John :)

John Watt

Date: 5/21/2020 12:20:00 AM

So happy to see your win today with your hope-filled sonnet, Aditi. "Cross over! Treasured faith holds that ridge." Beautifully written, my dear friend ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/21/2020 12:55:00 AM

I am grateful for all the blessings and encouragement with words of wisdom I receive from you John :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/20/2020 10:47:00 PM

A very flowing poem like water, Aditi. It flows from darkness to light. Congratulations.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/20/2020 11:20:00 PM

Glad you dived into it Sam. Thanks for your kind appreciation. :)

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 5/20/2020 4:47:00 PM

Congrats Aditi! A well deserved win although I would have put it higher up in the winners list.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/20/2020 11:19:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Krish :)

John Hamilton

Date: 5/20/2020 4:13:00 PM

A wonderful write Aditi, I don't think I've read you before. Congrats on a very worthy win!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/20/2020 11:18:00 PM

Thank you for your appreciation and my placement in your contest John :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/18/2020 8:51:00 PM

A beautiful sonnet of faith and the power of love to overcome, Aditi! I love this classic style...best of luck in the contest. xx Rhonda

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/18/2020 10:10:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words and appreciation Rhonda :) God bless you

Jenish Somadas

Date: 5/13/2020 9:35:00 AM

You are so talented..Great write Aditi.. Good luck in the contest..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/13/2020 9:59:00 AM

Thank you for your appreciation Jenish :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/12/2020 8:49:00 PM

This is a excellent write. I believe it will do wonderfully and I wish you well ~ God bless you abundantly - Love ~ Gina

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/12/2020 9:50:00 PM

Thanks for the love and generous review Regina. God bless you :)

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 5/12/2020 3:02:00 PM

You are a gifted writer and this is wonderful. Should do well in the contest! All the best

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/12/2020 9:49:00 PM

Thank you for your kind review Krish :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/12/2020 2:37:00 PM

Your poem flows well in emotions just as intended for the contest theme. The ending lines are superb! A winning poem for me, Aditi.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/12/2020 2:45:00 PM

That is a generous feedback. Thank you Vijay :)

John Watt

Date: 5/12/2020 1:33:00 PM

Deep and meaningful sonnet, Aditi. I hope this does well in the contest. Best wishes ~ John

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/12/2020 1:45:00 PM

Gratitude for your appreciation John. God bless you. :) Aditi