A Transitional Element In Evolution

vital impulse 
and I climb into my grey Ford 
I hold the steering wheel 
not to hit the car 
instinctively I twist 
on the left 
on the right 
should not I die 
because I want to get off 
After your breasts ... 
after I hear Bach!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcdaid Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 7:07 AM
beautifully crafted piece of writing
Victor Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 7:41 AM
Thank you!!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 3:07 AM
Wow! Very impressive surprise ending. Loved it!
Victor Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 3:11 AM
Thank you! :)
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