A Town Called Rotgut

The hinges of the swing doors creak as Zack Waverley enters the Rotgut bar
He stands in the doorway his huge frame blocking out the daylight
‘Hey Zack’ I cry ‘Is that a pistol in your pocket are you just pleased to see me’
His face lights up with a grin, ‘Hey sugar, have you got room for me’
I wink at him and smile at his subtle innuendo 
Zack was once one of my best customers
Not seen him for years though he left as soon as I fell pregnant
Sparks fly off his silver spurs as he swaggers over to the bar
Double whiskey on the rocks, he downs it in one swig then has another double
Are you read for some action I ask him, are you firing on both barrels?
Zack nods his head and we head for the door to go to the old motel 
Suddenly there is a loud BANG and a pistol is fired
Zack falls to the floor as dead as a dodo
A single bullet wound to his chest
My son stands there with a smirk on his face
The smoking pistol in his hands
‘Sorry it had to end this way dad’ he says stepping over the lifeless body
I fall to my knees and cry
Oh why oh why did I lie
'Zack wasn’t yer Pa' I cried
I just gave his name I should never have lied
He was just a man I could never resist
Guess I better tick his name off my list

Jan Allison
30th July 2014
Written for A Town Called Rotgut Contest Sponsored by Jerry T Curtis
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Anish Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 11:03 PM
You tell a sad tale in this one. Something out of Bonanza - which re -runs I often watch. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Allison Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 3:37 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Matthew. Hugs Jan xxx
Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 3:17 PM
I have heard of this thing happening in real life where people lie about something like that and an innocent person dies for it. Well, not really "innocent" in this case but of THAT particular thing he was. GOOD job on this, Jan.
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 4:36 PM
Thanks for the comment Andrea. I commented on Tim's poem and he said i should write one - this was submitted as no 35 in the contest - phew! Hugs Jan xxxx
Onclaud Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 12:25 PM
very descriptive and full of detailed images, jan... another great piece.. huggs
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 4:35 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Nette:-) Hugs Jan xxxx
Smith Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 8:16 AM
Outstanding Jan...I love it luckily I released your muse :) hugs:)
Smith Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 8:26 AM
Thank you my dear dear good friend xxx
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 8:21 AM
I got a hug, kiss and cocktails when i lost my muse - If i get placed with this write i will dedicate it to you my lovely friend. Hugs Hugs Hugs Jan xxx
Smith Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 8:13 AM
Oh the tangled web we weave!.. Lol.. Gl in the contest dear Jan!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 8:20 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Arlene. Hugs Jan xxx
Nance Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 7:34 AM
haha fun!
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 7:36 AM
Tim encouraged me to write it - not sure if it's what Jerry is after but the challenge was fun:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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