A Touch of Sunset

watching,
with bated breath,
the sun begin to rise
and ribbon rippling ocean waves
with gold.

18.09.19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Watt Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 6:27 PM
Wendy, as you said in your comment to Line, the sky is such a powerful painting. Congrats on your win today with this lovely cinquain sunset seascape ~ John (p.s. thank you for spelling "bated breath" correctly! I love that you always pay close attention to the little things...)
La France Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 11:53 AM
Wendy, congrats on having your poem featured on Brian's Cinquain blog
Watson Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 9:39 AM
Thank you Dear Heart. I like to support them and it doesn't always entail having to compose new poems.
Gauthier Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 6:17 AM
Lovely imagery, Wendy.
Watson Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 9:40 AM
Thank you,Line. The sky can be such a powerful painting.
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