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A Touch

A TOUCH On an impulse, but oft rehearsed in dreams, A surreptitious larceny that seems, In recollection pure and innocent, Yet still concealing passionate intent And yearning, for its chaste recipient. Unknowing of such matters of the heart, Confused, bewildered how to even start To woo this object of his heart's desire. To lie within her arms he did aspire, With ardent longing was he set afire. At last, a start along love's road he made, A magic moment when his hand had strayed Innocuously to brush against her breast. She let the moment pass without protest, Quite unaware that she had been caressed. Fate intervened and drove them far apart. His amorous intent was stifled at the start. True love he found elsewhere, he did not grudge In age that moment that had meant so much- Now teenage memory - a stolen touch.

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Date: 2/15/2023 1:43:00 AM
Its a busy time for me Peter, but I would like to read my way through your poems.
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Date: 7/28/2018 3:46:00 PM
A warm welcome to Poetry Soup Peter! I have been here since 2010 January. I think you will enjoy this poetic family very much. This is a lovely first post and I will follow your work. It is so nice to meet you. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 7/27/2018 4:28:00 PM
A brilliant poem, loved it
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Date: 7/27/2018 4:17:00 PM
I love the story you created with this theme . Beautiful wording as well . It takes me to another time. Thank you.
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Date: 8/24/2017 12:34:00 PM
I remember, so sweetly innocent. i will rest within this memory for a while; so well written so profound.
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Peter Rees
Date: 8/25/2017 4:30:00 AM
Thank you Patricia. Needless to say, there's a background story to this - isn't there always ?
Date: 8/1/2017 6:47:00 AM
A teenage memory---a wonderful poem and a pleasure to read.
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Peter Rees
Date: 8/1/2017 7:08:00 AM
Thank you for this kind comment, Thomas.
Date: 7/31/2017 11:02:00 PM
Smoothly flowing words,centered around the poem theme..great work!
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Peter Rees
Date: 8/1/2017 4:26:00 AM
Thank you. I design my poems to be read aloud, therefore I read them first to myself out loud, to see if they flow and if the rhythm works. Thank you therefore for your insight.
Date: 7/31/2017 2:40:00 PM
Wow...'tis awesome! 10+....I love this... Kudos!
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Peter Rees
Date: 7/31/2017 3:10:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poem, and thanks for commenting. Appreciated,
Date: 7/29/2017 10:21:00 AM
What a great poem. Welcome to poetry soup
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Peter Rees
Date: 7/29/2017 11:12:00 AM
Many thanks.I'm sure I'm going to enjoy this.
Date: 7/29/2017 8:26:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Peter - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - // Sun :)
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Peter Rees
Date: 7/29/2017 11:11:00 AM
Thank you. I'm looking forward to lots of inspiration.

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