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You come in search of love back to the tomb Beneath the Weeping Willow tree it lies The place where last you lips brought me to bloom Where flame of passion danced in brilliant eyes This very spot is where you buried love For great was need to soar to other climes and so you took to wing and flew above Entombed was I, enshrouded in your rhymes My broken heart would not be laid to rest In sepulcher serene, it faintly beat Believing that someday you’d end the quest And make your way back here my heart to greet By Ancient Tomb of Bloom I hear your sigh Remorse for broken vows you now confess You turn your face with pain to silent sky And then you hear the rustle of my dress Out from behind the Weeping Willow tree Where I have waited, longing for this day I stand before you, resurrected- free With trembling heart, you hear me softly say: “You’ve come back to this sacred burial ground Where our love breathed its last to let you fly And now you see me here; to you I’m bound ...Make love to me, for true love cannot die." You ravish me, on Tomb of Ancient Bloom The fragrance of my rose perfumes the air You press me close and place in hand a plume “Immortalize with words our love in prayer.”
For Justin Bordner's Tomb of Ancient Bloom Contest February 20, 2016

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Date: 3/13/2016 4:19:00 AM
It be not love that built the tomb but jealous battle that portended doom, yet it is the truth of love that brought you bloom, and for your heart he does exhume your priceless passion that must resume..."My broken heart would not be laid to rest in sepulchre serene, it faintly beat believing that someday you'd end the quest..." this poem is truly magnificent in skill and ravishing in soulful beauty my Beloved Poetess, you lead me to desire...J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2016 4:52:00 AM
Thank you for the visit, Justin. I put heart and soul into this write. Your contest themes always inspire me...but alas....I didn't win the prize. Thanks for coming by...
Date: 2/25/2016 8:56:00 PM
Love's resurrected and free from serene sepulcher because love was treasured there in. 7 i feel. i simply say it's an excellent romantic poem filled with heartfelt diamond words, my lovely smiling friend, bl
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Date: 2/21/2016 9:56:00 PM
And you said you weren't going to attempt it ... well I'm glad you did! The passion and drama was real, and you've captured the essence of the theme superbly! It's difficult trying to work with since we are dealing with life and death, but you brought the two together in matrimony "sepulcher serene" << like this. Well done.
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Date: 2/21/2016 11:06:00 AM
The words are delicious, descriptive, lively, creative and masterful, flowing onto the page with a dramatic, poetic style, with the aid of a brilliant wit that captures the reader's imagination and attention from the beginning and delivers to the end. The words are clever and pretentious, yet ring with a realistic sound, adding flavor and zest to this saga. Emile. #7 typo-(last you lips)
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Date: 2/21/2016 7:40:00 AM
- Wow, dear Eileen ....... one of your most beautiful pearls - A winning poem in my opinion :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/21/2016 9:23:00 AM
I hope Justin thinks so as well, Sunshine. :) How are you, dear...Thank you for spreading warm and love.
Date: 2/21/2016 2:34:00 AM
It seems your muse found the way to make her presence felt, stronger and prettier dear, Eileen. Wonderful creation that demands to be noticed. Good luck!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/21/2016 9:28:00 AM
Awwwwww....I'm honored, my dear poet. Your visit is welcome. I'm glad you liked this piece. I'm not sure how it will fare as I have read another that is simply a masterpiece. However, it's worth a try. Blessings.
Date: 2/20/2016 2:19:00 PM
This is one of the very best entries I have read so far for this contest, Eileen. You had the ideal topic, and with gusto you tackled it in one of your favourite forms, comprising iambic meter and rhyme. Well done:) hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/21/2016 9:32:00 AM
Thank you, dear. I've only read Timothy's entry....and I think he is my stiffest competitor just because I know the kind of writing Justin likes. Oh well....I won't lose anything by trying...except my feelings! ;) Thanks for the visit.
Date: 2/20/2016 10:19:00 AM
It seems writing for Justin's contest was all you needed to revitalize your muse. Ooh la la hot! Hugs Rick.
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Date: 2/20/2016 11:22:00 AM
So happy you're the first to post! Richard...you've missed my last two poems. They were inspired by contest themes. I'll submit the one for Mystic Rose's contest. I missed the Sometimes...Never...Always one. Give them a read, please. Hugs

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