A Tiny House 2nd

The abandon house
Is tilted from storms 
When the wind blows 
The house creaks
Yet it still standing\

Someone took a walk 
To the abandon house
He noticed the change
There was a differences

The tall trees were gone
both windows were  clean
Yet no one lived there
The lawn had two tombstones

It was strange to see
He wanted to explore
It was dark he left
Wanting to explore 
in the daylight

When he did return 
He noticed the tombstone
There were two of them
He read one tombstone

It was his wife 's stone
He read the other
Then he went to rest 
Beside his wife
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Date: 11/20/2024 5:28:00 PM
This is wonderful Darlene, and the end was a surprise. Quite a story!
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Date: 11/21/2024 9:37:00 AM
Hello David Fisher, Thank you David it came out of my imagination. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 10/19/2024 10:53:00 AM
Oh my. So ghostly!
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Date: 10/19/2024 2:46:00 PM
Hello Andrea, yes ghostly. He did not know that he was dead. Thank, you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 10/8/2024 6:14:00 AM
Oh, sends chills up my spine. Apropos after Helene. Fave!
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Date: 10/8/2024 10:32:00 AM
Hello Kim, Yes apropos for Helene.Kim, thank hyou for the fav. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 10/6/2024 11:43:00 AM
It took him time to realize that it was his own stone. Nicely written but glad they rest together in peace. love phyl
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Date: 10/6/2024 12:16:00 PM
Hello Phyllis, Thank you Phyllis. He did not know that hwe was dead. Yes they are together. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 10/6/2024 5:56:00 AM
Such a sad and beautiful story Darlene! I am glad they are are resting forever together! I hope you've been well! Happy Sunday xxoo
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Date: 10/6/2024 7:30:00 AM
Hello Mike, Yes thank you I have been well. Yes they are resting together. He did not know he was dead. That is why he went to read the stone beside his wife. Happy Sunday. xxxxx ooooooo. I hope you are well. /Darlen4/
Date: 10/5/2024 11:06:00 PM
Hello Darlene, an outstanding imagistic poem. My friend have a lovely Sunday.
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Date: 10/6/2024 7:26:00 AM
Hello Mulu, Thank you for thjis lovely comment. . Blessings my friend./Darlene/
Date: 9/29/2024 5:21:00 AM
Ah so sad but a truly well written sequel to poem no. 1 about the tiny house. You have such a vivid imagination, well penned. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 9/29/2024 8:53:00 AM
Hello Jennifer Proxenos, hello stranger. so nice to see you on my page. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 9/28/2024 11:21:00 AM
Thanks Darlene, my wife asked who did the cleaning? I tried reading this to her, and I started to get tears in my eyes. You created a very potent story here.
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Date: 9/28/2024 3:42:00 PM
hello Duke, I haver no idea who did the cleaning. they were were both dead. he did not know he was dead. Until he saw the tombstone with his name on it. Enjoy your weekend. my friend./Darlene/
Date: 9/28/2024 9:09:00 AM
Darlene, a pleasure to read this tale. It gives some impetus to think about where we're all headed and what to make of it. We have the opportunity to do some wonderful things for people when we are alive. Hopefully we can all take advantage of that before we head to our resting place.
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Date: 9/28/2024 10:53:00 AM
Hello Duke, Yes Duke we all have the opportunity to do wondrful thing for people when w are alive. Enjoy your weekend. m y friend. /Darlene/
Date: 9/27/2024 5:11:00 PM
Very dramatic Darlene. Not only that, but well written, indeed! Merci ~~~Pangie
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Date: 9/28/2024 10:49:00 AM
Hello Panagiota Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/ I hope you are having a nice day. Hugs. /Darlene xxx
Date: 9/27/2024 12:52:00 AM
sad but what a great poem!
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Date: 9/27/2024 9:48:00 AM
Hello Aurore, Yes it is sad He did not know he was dead. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 9/26/2024 5:02:00 PM
Oh my. What an ending. Well done, Darlene.
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Date: 9/27/2024 9:48:00 AM
Hello Andrea, Thank you Andrea. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 9/26/2024 3:38:00 AM
It was a nice but sad conclusion to your story Darlene - thanks for writing it. Hugs Maria
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Date: 9/26/2024 10:39:00 AM
Hello maria, He di not know he was dead. Thank you for the wonderful comment. Your welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 9/24/2024 12:50:00 PM
A tiny house with a wonderful story Darlene.
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Date: 9/24/2024 2:57:00 PM
Hello John Read yes that is what it is John. My friend. Enjoy your evenig. /Darlene/
Date: 9/24/2024 10:37:00 AM
Loved reading your wonderful yet sad write. Great Ending...  Have a great day writing away..............
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Date: 9/24/2024 11:43:00 AM
Hello Paula, Thank you for thisw wonderful comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 9/24/2024 5:40:00 AM
Very mysterious. I enjoyed this part 2 Darlene. It can even lead to part 3! Good one :)
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Date: 9/24/2024 9:26:00 AM
Hello Heidi, I will give it some thought for a part 3.Thank yu for the wonderful comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
Date: 9/24/2024 12:49:00 AM
Very sad but I enjoyed the poem.
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Date: 9/24/2024 9:29:00 AM
Hello Ayrsha Nuwas, So nice to meet you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Date: 9/23/2024 2:36:00 PM
Dearest Darlene, thank you for writing this poem. I especially enjoyed reading it this evening. pleasure reading.
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Date: 9/23/2024 2:55:00 PM
Hi Peonieslore, I want to welcome you to Poetry Soup. Enkoy your evening my friend. / Darlene/xo
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Date: 9/23/2024 2:51:00 PM
Hello Peoniesiore xo, so nice to meet you. Your welcome. The other poem is the first part Titled A Tiny House. This pone is part 2. Enjoy your evening my friend. xo/Darlene/
Date: 9/23/2024 1:59:00 PM
Quite a spooky tale Darlene, hope you are keeping well. Tom
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Date: 9/23/2024 2:45:00 PM
Hello Tom Cunningham,Y es it is spooky tale. I am keeping well thank you. I hope you are to. My friend, enjoy your evening. /Darlene/
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