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A Tiny House 2nd

The abandon house Is tilted from storms When the wind blows The house creaks Yet it still standing\ Someone took a walk To the abandon house He noticed the change There was a differences The tall trees were gone both windows were clean Yet no one lived there The lawn had two tombstones It was strange to see He wanted to explore It was dark he left Wanting to explore in the daylight When he did return He noticed the tombstone There were two of them He read one tombstone It was his wife 's stone He read the other Then he went to rest Beside his wife

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David Fisher

Date: 11/20/2024 5:28:00 PM

This is wonderful Darlene, and the end was a surprise. Quite a story!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/21/2024 9:37:00 AM

Hello David Fisher, Thank you David it came out of my imagination. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2024 10:53:00 AM

Oh my. So ghostly!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/19/2024 2:46:00 PM

Hello Andrea, yes ghostly. He did not know that he was dead. Thank, you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/8/2024 6:14:00 AM

Oh, sends chills up my spine. Apropos after Helene. Fave!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/8/2024 10:32:00 AM

Hello Kim, Yes apropos for Helene.Kim, thank hyou for the fav. Hugs. /Darlene/

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/6/2024 11:43:00 AM

It took him time to realize that it was his own stone. Nicely written but glad they rest together in peace. love phyl

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/6/2024 12:16:00 PM

Hello Phyllis, Thank you Phyllis. He did not know that hwe was dead. Yes they are together. Hugs. /Darlene/

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/6/2024 5:56:00 AM

Such a sad and beautiful story Darlene! I am glad they are are resting forever together! I hope you've been well! Happy Sunday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/6/2024 7:30:00 AM

Hello Mike, Yes thank you I have been well. Yes they are resting together. He did not know he was dead. That is why he went to read the stone beside his wife. Happy Sunday. xxxxx ooooooo. I hope you are well. /Darlen4/

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 10/5/2024 11:06:00 PM

Hello Darlene, an outstanding imagistic poem. My friend have a lovely Sunday.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/6/2024 7:26:00 AM

Hello Mulu, Thank you for thjis lovely comment. . Blessings my friend./Darlene/

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/29/2024 5:21:00 AM

Ah so sad but a truly well written sequel to poem no. 1 about the tiny house. You have such a vivid imagination, well penned. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2024 8:53:00 AM

Hello Jennifer Proxenos, hello stranger. so nice to see you on my page. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/28/2024 11:21:00 AM

Thanks Darlene, my wife asked who did the cleaning? I tried reading this to her, and I started to get tears in my eyes. You created a very potent story here.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/28/2024 3:42:00 PM

hello Duke, I haver no idea who did the cleaning. they were were both dead. he did not know he was dead. Until he saw the tombstone with his name on it. Enjoy your weekend. my friend./Darlene/

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/28/2024 9:09:00 AM

Darlene, a pleasure to read this tale. It gives some impetus to think about where we're all headed and what to make of it. We have the opportunity to do some wonderful things for people when we are alive. Hopefully we can all take advantage of that before we head to our resting place.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/28/2024 10:53:00 AM

Hello Duke, Yes Duke we all have the opportunity to do wondrful thing for people when w are alive. Enjoy your weekend. m y friend. /Darlene/

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/27/2024 5:11:00 PM

Very dramatic Darlene. Not only that, but well written, indeed! Merci ~~~Pangie

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/28/2024 10:49:00 AM

Hello Panagiota Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/ I hope you are having a nice day. Hugs. /Darlene xxx

Aurore Severo

Date: 9/27/2024 12:52:00 AM

sad but what a great poem!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/27/2024 9:48:00 AM

Hello Aurore, Yes it is sad He did not know he was dead. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2024 5:02:00 PM

Oh my. What an ending. Well done, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/27/2024 9:48:00 AM

Hello Andrea, Thank you Andrea. Hugs. /Darlene/

Maria Williams

Date: 9/26/2024 3:38:00 AM

It was a nice but sad conclusion to your story Darlene - thanks for writing it. Hugs Maria

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/26/2024 10:39:00 AM

Hello maria, He di not know he was dead. Thank you for the wonderful comment. Your welcome. Hugs. /Darlene/

John Read

Date: 9/24/2024 12:50:00 PM

A tiny house with a wonderful story Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/24/2024 2:57:00 PM

Hello John Read yes that is what it is John. My friend. Enjoy your evenig. /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/24/2024 10:37:00 AM

Loved reading your wonderful yet sad write. Great Ending... Have a great day writing away..............

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/24/2024 11:43:00 AM

Hello Paula, Thank you for thisw wonderful comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/24/2024 5:40:00 AM

Very mysterious. I enjoyed this part 2 Darlene. It can even lead to part 3! Good one :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/24/2024 9:26:00 AM

Hello Heidi, I will give it some thought for a part 3.Thank yu for the wonderful comment. Hugs. /Darlene/

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 9/24/2024 12:49:00 AM

Very sad but I enjoyed the poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/24/2024 9:29:00 AM

Hello Ayrsha Nuwas, So nice to meet you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Peonieslore xo

Date: 9/23/2024 2:36:00 PM

Dearest Darlene, thank you for writing this poem. I especially enjoyed reading it this evening. pleasure reading.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/23/2024 2:55:00 PM

Hi Peonieslore, I want to welcome you to Poetry Soup. Enkoy your evening my friend. / Darlene/xo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/23/2024 2:51:00 PM

Hello Peoniesiore xo, so nice to meet you. Your welcome. The other poem is the first part Titled A Tiny House. This pone is part 2. Enjoy your evening my friend. xo/Darlene/

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/23/2024 1:59:00 PM

Quite a spooky tale Darlene, hope you are keeping well. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/23/2024 2:45:00 PM

Hello Tom Cunningham,Y es it is spooky tale. I am keeping well thank you. I hope you are to. My friend, enjoy your evening. /Darlene/