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A Time To Remember

A Time to Remember There was a time Given to me for just a short while When I felt I could fly Transported over the sea of delight. It took you and I by surprise Ill prepared for such a flight But in that special time There was only you and I. The winds took us up high Above the clouds of white Erasing the world from our eyes To a place of light that couldn't be denied. Into view came an isle Upon which we rested a while Reveling in the warm sunshine Listening to the changing tide. A beautiful dream for a while Our love needed no reasons why But grounding it, had to be denied For it could only live in another place and time. And after all this time A certain thought in my mind Brings your face back in its eye And I remember the time I could fly. By CarolineCécile, June 9, 2009.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/13/2010 8:54:00 AM
it is a beautiful poem and it touches the passions
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Date: 8/20/2010 12:59:00 AM
reading your first poem posted on soup, very enjoyable read, Harry
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Date: 11/15/2009 12:32:00 PM
Caroline, congrats on your feature poem this week! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/15/2009 11:30:00 AM
lovely, just lovely
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Date: 11/11/2009 5:12:00 AM
Beautiful, just beautiful. Congratulations, Caroline, on having your well-written poem featured this week. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 11/10/2009 6:56:00 PM
Interesting poem. Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/10/2009 4:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Caroline. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2009 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I enjoyed reading it. Love Pam
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Date: 11/9/2009 11:09:00 AM
Congratson your wonderful poem being featured this week. Regards Janette
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Date: 11/9/2009 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured this week Caroline >> James
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Date: 10/16/2009 12:16:00 PM
Imagination is the greatest nation on earth. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/26/2009 6:08:00 PM
loverly love poem! Light & Love
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Date: 8/22/2009 5:21:00 PM
Great job, you made it seem easy!
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Date: 8/4/2009 1:00:00 PM
Love! wonderful and fearful.
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Date: 6/12/2009 6:30:00 AM
Carolyn I enjoyed the journey that this poem took me on I'm currently not able to spend a lot of time in the site but wanted to welcome you here and I hope you enjoy the Soup, it is a very special place to many of us - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/12/2009 3:55:00 AM
Caroline, a most delightful poem, it flowed so natural, thank you for your kind comments>James
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Date: 6/11/2009 9:25:00 AM
An amazing write this is! Good form and use of imagery! - jeremia
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