A Tiger In My Trifle

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[Just once in a while, I try to write a child friendly
Poem which doesn’t end up as a horrific gore-fest...
This is one such attempt...]


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There’s a tiger in my trifle, there’s a seahorse in the queue
Not sure about a café with a coypu in the stew
The polar bear just over there is chasing a gnu
Six penguins just got flattened by a manic kangaroo

The keeper’s got a net, he says I’ll catch the pelican
Can he catch the pelican? No-one knows how well he can
A chimpanzee is wearing clothes and strutting like a man
He’s blowing noisy kisses to the old orang-utan

The seals are in the pond causing lots of fuss and dramas 
A strange turn of events because they’re eating the piranhas
The gorilla who would often spend all day eating bananas 
Is making Tarzan noises as he tries to ride the llamas 

The rhino’s gone out through the gate, he just got on a bus
He couldn’t pay the fare... the driver didn’t make a fuss 
Police are running here and there, they don't know what to do
That's what happens when they have an earthquake at the zoo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 3/8/2021 5:04:00 PM
what a hilarious poem I can see you love writing kids poems as much as I do:-) hugs jan xx
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Terry Flood
Date: 3/9/2021 12:56:00 AM
Thanks Jan. I’m seeing each one as practice. Annie tells me I should write for kids. I just refer her to my first novel about a character that the press call ‘Captain Lemon’. Meant to be a ‘ditty’ of a few pages to amuse my grandson, it ended up with bombs; the potential end of the world; bodies being eaten alive by insects; arms, legs and heads flying everywhere; oh and someone who’s actually a tree... sometimes. I won’t be showing it to little Joey! Glad you liked ‘Tiger Trifle’, I think I’m getting there. Terry
Date: 3/4/2021 3:02:00 PM
Wonderful! Delightful! You have entertained this child no end, Terry. Thank you so much, Gershon (soupmail, please).
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Terry Flood
Date: 3/4/2021 3:59:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. (soup mailed as requested... sorry it’s a tad long). So glad you liked. Terry
Date: 3/4/2021 9:47:00 AM
LOL. This is a gem! I loved the last verse which put the lid on the rest of the poem. You have talent, my friend!
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Terry Flood
Date: 3/4/2021 10:51:00 AM
Thanks so much. When I set out to write for kids my subconscious tends to lead me astray and the red stuff starts to splatter. So I’m well chuffed with your generous compliment. Terry
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