A Thunderous Silence

Her memories had her waiting
for his oft' tardy appearance,
and in her patient time
perhaps wondering,
"Has he ever noticed the scar
below my kneecap?"
His litany of lateness'
was covered by a bond 
of mutually assured affection.
She'd never hold him to a sundial.
And in those times together,
four eyes flickering
with a lingering seep of memory;
each owning a piece of time,
holding it to savor,
watching her, pleased more
by her company
than any assistance,
silence seemed to have been there,
waiting for them.
And in that moment's breathless anticipation
his realization was;
he'd wait an hour to watch her mouth,
the scintillating way words
unspooled from her lips.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Brown Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 8:16 AM
I truly enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Chuck. I hope you have an amazing weekend. Love, Carol
Novotny Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 8:59 AM
It will be amazing. The weddings of friends always inspire my pen. Thank you for your compliment. Chuck
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 1:55 PM
Chuck, this is a wery good poem,that I like very much. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Novotny Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 9:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Bauer Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 1:42 PM
wow! this is an impressive piece of writing. i love the kneecap question and the last 3 lines the most. the unspooling words is such a great image!
Novotny Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 9:01 AM
Some of my best words are the remembered experiences shared with others. Thank you Ilene
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace