A Three Hour Tour

Two friends set out to sail the sea,
Huh? They did not ask you or me,
I heard strong winds blew through,
it sounds like deja vu...
now they're drinking coconut tea!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Cervenka Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 2:07 PM
But I wanted to go on that cruise! Cute Lim. ~jan
Aul Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 10:57 AM
I just want to get lost at times :-) Thanks .......... George
Hopper Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 1:36 PM
Cute limerick
Aul Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 10:58 AM
Thank you for reading my work............ George
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