A Thousand Eyes

Peacocks spread their cloaks of a thousand eyes ~ Adults spread a million lies

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 12/19/2022 8:29:00 PM

Clever, and sadly true.

Valsa George

Date: 12/19/2022 8:26:00 PM

Right observation....Gershon! The analogy is quite apt !

FJ Thomas

Date: 12/19/2022 4:41:00 PM

Well I did not see that coming! Some of those lies are more painted than the peacock lol. Hello GW

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/19/2022 7:47:00 PM

Pointed lies; painted eyes...

Bobby May

Date: 12/19/2022 12:24:00 PM

Isn't that the truth thanks for not using all those big words I have to look up lol love Ya big Brother. Happy Holidays!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/19/2022 3:11:00 PM

I'm confining myself to words of less than 8 syllables this week. Back to normal next week. ~ Call me Mr. Polly Silly Bick

John Lawless

Date: 12/18/2022 7:13:00 AM

as we know Gershon "todays peacock can be tomorrows feather duster"

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/18/2022 7:36:00 PM

-- just as yesterday's mop can be today's cornrows. lol. :) gw

Chipepo Lwele

Date: 12/18/2022 6:35:00 AM

Wonderful