A thought arises

A thought arises Sunlight heralds a new day Both fade into dark Inspired by Raul's Awaiting the Dawn contest

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Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 2/27/2010 6:06:00 PM

Thankxxx Linda for your lovely comments on my poetry tonight.. appreciate very much.. I posted a new blog on the soup site issues last night ... appreciate your input... luv.. Linda-Marie.. I know the above contest is over but your Haiku is a charmer to read ... lovely words... enjoyed..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2010 5:03:00 PM

Very very nice!! Good luck in the contest,LInda!!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/21/2010 5:02:00 AM

This interesting Haiku of yours pulls the reader right in with it! Very powerful, Linda. My insights about your writing/poetic insights/abilities were well founded. Into my favs, Lady Linda. -Robert

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/20/2010 5:10:00 PM

A very different take on thought & dawning excellent. Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2010 3:11:00 PM

HI, LInda, enjoyed your haiku here! Luv, andrea

Colleen Bono

Date: 2/20/2010 8:21:00 AM

A winner in my book.You have soup mail.