A Thought

Luxuries and mansions Are subject to the money, But a moment of bliss, Is superior and expensive Than both.

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Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 8/9/2011 3:07:00 PM

So very true Charles... Words of Wisdom....luv it...smiles!!!!

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/29/2010 9:15:00 AM

Words of wisdom in this Light Poetry, Charles. Calls for introspection especially these days. Always, Audrey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/13/2010 6:57:00 PM

Enjoyed your thought today....am trying to catch up on reading your work. Have been busy with the holidays.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/10/2010 3:37:00 AM

Great thoughts penned in this one..However it takes money to survive..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2010 1:11:00 PM

A true thought indeed, Charles! Nice little poem! Luv, Andrea

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/4/2010 8:08:00 AM

That is something to ponder on Charley. soup mail mom.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/4/2010 7:10:00 AM

Powerful piece Charles and something to tickle the mind to ponder .. wise words indeed my friend.. so appreciate your wonderful comment on my blog which I replied on my blog to u and everyone who leaves a comment ... sharing joys and poetry is wonderful .. and Lightening Ink is a good friend.. happy weekend luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/4/2010 6:33:00 AM

Money may buy mansions, son, but it can't buy happiness. Well done, dear. Love and blessings, "mom"

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/4/2010 6:24:00 AM

It is said that happiness is 10% and unhappiness 90%, but that 10% outweights the 90%. The moment of bliss is surely superior, Charles

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/4/2010 5:39:00 AM

WOW! good morning! I think, if U don't mind me saying I will stick 2 the expensive , luxury & the mansion,lol,, at least it won't hurt like the moment when one is lost in a bliss. Kidding ;-), I just woke up & this is the first poem, I'm reading,, By the way a moment in bliss is only perfect when someone tells you "I LOVE YOU" from the heart.. enjoyed your poem,,. and thanks for the *s.m.* when I'm fully awake i will return the smile... right now,,i need to make senseless comments,,always p.d.