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A Thought

A car door slams a spoon falls tingling as it hits the floor a person shouts a drunken call as he hit the floor a tap drips popping your eardrums a bottle smashes it hit a dark and dusky tunnel wall far deep in to the middle of night the rain falls soaking the nights floor i will not fall at the wet floor to hold you again to love you i will not sleep i will not eat until your resting here with me the nightwalker

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Date: 10/29/2010 7:56:00 AM
You seem to be dealing with some deep-seeded loneliness, Duncan. Many of us can relate to the message in this sad but well-penned poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/29/2010 5:29:00 AM
Very expressive work..I can see the scenes from the words' descriptive quality..Sara
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Date: 10/23/2010 12:47:00 PM
Good one!
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Date: 10/21/2010 8:11:00 AM
very poignant description as a way to get to a powerful love storly, wonderful and thanks for reading my poem Jim Gibbons
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