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A Thanksgiving Tongue Bathing

Tender pats of a grateful mum Saved from deaths door and sure scorching The heat and ash were so close to overpowering When a savior reached out and lifted us to safety.... How can I say thankyou, you are my hero? I have not words but an overflowing heart I give what I have....a tender touch As I wipe the dust from your eyes **Written about a picture of a mother dog that was rescued along with her pups from a burning building by a brave fireman. The mother dog licked his face tenderly to say thanks for your help!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/30/2011 7:45:00 AM
Awesome write, Doris! Great words!...All the best!...Love, Gert
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Date: 1/28/2011 7:16:00 PM
Very Nicely Worded!!! Christine
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Date: 1/26/2011 7:39:00 AM
Elegantly put Doris! Thank you for sharing I enjoyed reading your words today! Steve
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Date: 1/26/2011 6:33:00 AM
Beautiful, Doris. Excellent rendering. Enjoyed. Nice going. Be well. Have a great day. xxxRalph
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