A Tepid Breeze

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First, there's a tepid breeze; the air loses its nip, and the icicles drip. Then, green leaves top the trees, rivers and lakes unfreeze; and Spring slips Winter's grip. Daffodils start to sprout, poking up through the snow. Winter's about to go; of that, there's little doubt. Soon, tulips will pop out, and butterflies will show. I look forward to Spring, and the warmth it will bring.

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Jan Allison

Date: 3/24/2021 12:15:00 PM

what a charming poem Emile, i will see if my muse will come up with something for you:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/24/2021 2:15:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I look forward to reading your entry my friend, Emile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2021 7:36:00 AM

Congrats on this spring winner. We all are tired of winter and the isolation, spring will give us hope in all things. Sara

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2021 8:57:00 AM

Thanks Sara, as always, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/13/2021 2:57:00 AM

This one is such a great poem, Emile, great form too:)

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/13/2021 6:26:00 AM

Thanks Jo, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/12/2021 11:40:00 AM

You've hit the spot here, Emile. This is an exquisite piece of writing and such a lovely example of the HexSonnetta. Right now, I think all of us are breathing the anticipation of spring.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/12/2021 12:29:00 PM

Thanks L., as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.