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A Teasing Christmas Elf

A teasing elf named McWhistle McMack
Nearly spoiled Santa’s plan by stealing his sack.
Stole away with the toys
For most girls and all boys
Sweet forgiveness given when he came back.

Contest: Christmas Limerick  
Written 11-30-2018                        Sponsor: Carolyn Devonshire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/2/2018 7:49:00 PM
Well, you just have to give an elf it's moment of fun, sometimes. Great Limerick.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2018 10:11:00 PM
I had fun with him for sure.
Date: 12/2/2018 4:49:00 PM
what a naughty elf in your poem Caren, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2018 5:00:00 PM
Thank you. I thought he was funny when he hopped up and made me do a little autobiography about him. He was a haughty one, that.
Date: 12/2/2018 12:23:00 PM
Caren, I enjoyed the humor. Ran the second line through two syllable counters. One said 11 and the other said 12. But for this, your great entry would have placed higher. Competition for this contest was awesome and you did a great job. Thanks for supporting the contest with your witty verse. Best wishes for the holidays, Carolyn
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2018 2:30:00 PM
I probably say things in a different way than others. I rarely use the syllable counter, but it was FUN to rise to the occasion. Keep throwing those contests our way, Carolyn!
Date: 12/1/2018 12:20:00 PM
Beautiful... So beautiful! Keep it up souper.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/1/2018 9:52:00 PM
And you know there was some snotty-ness and uppity-looks and some mean stuff going on first before the forgiveness landed on him, right?