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A Tearful Goodbye

winter whispers hi-

a discoloured Autumn dream

fades,and slowly dies



Inspired by Raul's latest photo

Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2010

natureseasonsautumnhaiku

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May 2, 2010 at 8:44 AM

Beautiful Haiku Brian, apologies i never got the chance to say thank you for my last placing in your wonderful contest. Thank you, have a lovely Sunday evening >> James

Andrea Dietrich

April 24, 2010 at 11:59 PM

NICE! congratulations. LUv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 24, 2010 at 5:27 PM

Congratulations on your in in Raul's contest "Mourning Calm" Brian. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 24, 2010 at 12:23 PM

Congrats Brian on your winning poem in Raul;s contest .. elegant words for the photo ...nice win for u to enjoy..luv.. "Sweetheart"

April 24, 2010 at 4:38 AM

Great write that is very descriptive of the picture..Should do well in the contest...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara

April 23, 2010 at 8:30 PM

Brian, congrats on your success in my contest..Raul

Carrie Richards

April 23, 2010 at 8:04 AM

This is truly wonderful !! Oh my...I love this one!!

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