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A Teardrop In the Stream

From the side of the bridge A teardrop fell from her eye And splashed into the flowing waters Of the rippling stream passing by Away the teardrop was swept With the freshly fallen rain The rippling stream stole her tear But left behind the pain She stood staring at the stream Originating from the mountain top With water pure and clean A rippling flow that never stops She comes to this bridge Too many times to her it seems But her broken heart appears to mend After dropping tears into the stream She takes a cleansing breath Inhaling the fresh air She wipes her cheek dry And lets down her golden hair The tear is now long gone Fresh water in its place The rippling magic worked again She wore a smile upon her face Lovers may come and go Causing her heart to often ache But as long as streams still ripple Her spirit they’ll never break by Joe Flach, written for Constances' Rippling Stream Contest. Written and posted on 6/1/2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/9/2011 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:26:00 AM
on a roll, joe!! my happy thubs up tp you for a greeeat spot in the contest! :) huggs
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of constance, joe
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Date: 6/6/2011 7:11:00 AM
Great Win Joe. Keep it up. Mike
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Date: 6/6/2011 6:31:00 AM
Very touching write Joe..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:46:00 PM
you made me swoon, joe... congrats, congrats..:) huggs
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:32:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your splendid win in Constance's contest for second place ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 6/5/2011 7:56:00 PM
it's really lovely
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Date: 6/5/2011 7:22:00 PM
Congratulations Joe, on a shared second place in my Rippling Stream contest. I think your poem is beautiful~~
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Date: 6/1/2011 5:21:00 PM
Hope this is a winner for you. Mike
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Date: 6/1/2011 9:12:00 AM
flowing with sentimental and graceful images, joe... i likey! winning streaks for you! :) huggs, nette
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