A Teardrop In the Stream

From the side of the bridge
A teardrop fell from her eye
And splashed into the flowing waters
Of the rippling stream passing by

Away the teardrop was swept
With the freshly fallen rain
The rippling stream stole her tear
But left behind the pain

She stood staring at the stream
Originating from the mountain top
With water pure and clean
A rippling flow that never stops

She comes to this bridge
Too many times to her it seems
But her broken heart appears to mend
After dropping tears into the stream

She takes a cleansing breath
Inhaling the fresh air
She wipes her cheek dry
And lets down her golden hair

The tear is now long gone
Fresh water in its place
The rippling magic worked again
She wore a smile upon her face

Lovers may come and go
Causing her heart to often ache
But as long as streams still ripple
Her spirit they’ll never break


by Joe Flach, written for Constances' Rippling Stream Contest.  
Written and posted on 6/1/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 7:48 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Joe. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 1:26 AM
on a roll, joe!! my happy thubs up tp you for a greeeat spot in the contest! :) huggs
Mehta Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 9:09 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of constance, joe
Dailey Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 7:11 AM
Great Win Joe. Keep it up. Mike
Poet Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 6:31 AM
Very touching write Joe..Congrats on your win..
Onclaud Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 9:46 PM
you made me swoon, joe... congrats, congrats..:) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 8:32 PM
Congrats Joe on your splendid win in Constance's contest for second place ..enjoy with luv..
Konos Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 7:56 PM
it's really lovely
La France Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 7:22 PM
Congratulations Joe, on a shared second place in my Rippling Stream contest. I think your poem is beautiful~~
Dailey Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 5:21 PM
Hope this is a winner for you. Mike
Onclaud Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 9:12 AM
flowing with sentimental and graceful images, joe... i likey! winning streaks for you! :) huggs, nette
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