A Tear In the Sand

Sitting on a beach
Alone I stare out to sea
I watch the waves grow and die
Endlessly on the rocky shore
A single black bird circles above
Watching me watching it
It speaks to me in words I do not understand
Clouds out on the horizon
Dark and windswept
Edged by gold from the failing sun
Flashes of lightening
Filling my eyes with fire and pain
A newspaper flies by on a tortured wind
Carried miles across the water
Eventually landing across my legs
Black print on white paper
Saying that a child has died
Killed by abuse and neglect
Buried in a shallow grave
Left alone by those who “loved” her
A tear falls down my cheek
Falling into the sand
Washed away by the next wave
Never to be seen again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Bird Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 10:05 AM
A heartbreaking of emotions I felt while reading this perfectly woven together thread.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 25, 2008 at 7:34 PM
A harrowing piece... excellent visuals and powerfully expressed emotion, BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Ingle Avatar
December 20, 2008 at 11:25 PM
Great writing...Moves one to tears...It reminds me of that little girl they just found after several months of her mom double lying in jail. Too many loonies out their that don't even deserve to have children. I hope she gets her just reward. Keep up the splendid writing. Lawrence in Lou. Ky.
Wiggins Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 2:07 PM
Very deep and beautifully written... *Breana*
Gass Avatar
December 14, 2008 at 11:44 AM
This s such a beautifully written poem. Vivid imagery and deep felt emotion flow through it, from the beginning to the end. Very moving. Love Robin
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