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A Tear Fell

Lips to kiss away
a tear of a mighty man,
finger tips that track
the cheeks of his sentiment
hint’s of the love in his heart.

© Harry J Horsman 2013      

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/18/2013 2:15:00 AM
Harry very beautiful poem poet
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Date: 2/17/2013 11:13:00 AM
Harry back for a re-read of this beautiful write...David
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Date: 2/17/2013 7:17:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful and very touching, my friend! Kudos! Have a great day! - Jack
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Date: 2/16/2013 8:44:00 PM
your short poem conveys a lot..Thnks for yur comment on "lost' am new on poetrysoup i need your precious comments..
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Date: 2/16/2013 6:54:00 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed the sentiment of this one..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 2/16/2013 6:58:00 AM
Dear Harry, Aesthetically romantic, tenderly provoking the heart! Thank you!
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Date: 2/16/2013 6:02:00 AM
"finger tips that track the cheeks of his sentiment" Nice.
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Date: 2/16/2013 5:17:00 AM
I can relate.
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Date: 2/15/2013 7:26:00 PM
Oh my! This is very moving Harry. A great portrayal of the love that resides in your heart.
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Date: 2/15/2013 9:49:00 AM
It's a fantastic magic of words penned where there's nice game of love. You can bind sweet feelings in words, you are an expert master to do that I know. Thanks for your kind comment, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 2/15/2013 7:01:00 AM
Oh yes Harry...'Lips to kiss away a tear of a mighty man'...can't be put any better than that...have a good one my friend - Tim
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Date: 2/14/2013 8:32:00 PM
Dear Harry, a lovely image and feeling... one kiss and touch can bring the best, in new love...xox~pd
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Date: 2/14/2013 7:16:00 PM
Interesting work, Harry. Very heartfelt, to see the tears of any man. Always, Laura
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Date: 2/14/2013 4:40:00 PM
Let me dry your tears darling, I can't stand to have a sweet man like you be sad. Tomorrow will be better I promise. Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 2/14/2013 12:09:00 PM
Harry; This is great. A mighty man can cry too. I told you once - there is nothing wrong with that. Have a great V. Day - just don't eat too much candy. Lucilla
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Date: 2/14/2013 6:47:00 AM
How absolutely dreamy and romantic! Wonderful write, Harry! :)
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Date: 2/14/2013 5:54:00 AM
very nice Tanka Harry....best wishes
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Date: 2/14/2013 4:08:00 AM
Harry... exquisite....David
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Date: 2/14/2013 3:44:00 AM
Just wonderful written, Harry - Have a sweet heart day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/14/2013 3:30:00 AM
Harry, a tear of a mighty man. Nice mix. you are a mighty guy. Looking forward to reading more of your poems. TC
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Date: 2/14/2013 12:34:00 AM
Everything has been already said Harry.. One very fine Tanka my friend. :o)
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Date: 2/13/2013 11:58:00 PM
This is beautiful Harry....
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Date: 2/13/2013 6:05:00 PM
Ohh, so sweet and adorable. Love it, Harry!
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Date: 2/13/2013 5:31:00 PM
Aah this is so sweet and so nice,. I love your write dearest poet Harry...:) enjoyed so much<3 Happy Valentine my dearest one <3 :) Sk
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Date: 2/13/2013 4:11:00 PM
A simple beauty is what this Tanka is, Jack...straight from the heart. Always, Annalise
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