A Tear Fell

Lips to kiss away
a tear of a mighty man,
finger tips that track
the cheeks of his sentiment
hint’s of the love in his heart.

© Harry J Horsman 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sanders Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 2:15 AM
Harry very beautiful poem poet
Williams Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 11:13 AM
Harry back for a re-read of this beautiful write...David
Ellison Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 7:17 AM
This is absolutely beautiful and very touching, my friend! Kudos! Have a great day! - Jack
Ashrafi Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 8:44 PM
your short poem conveys a lot..Thnks for yur comment on "lost' am new on poetrysoup i need your precious comments..
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 6:54 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed the sentiment of this one..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
Trifiatis Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 6:58 AM
Dear Harry, Aesthetically romantic, tenderly provoking the heart! Thank you!
Humphries Artist Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 6:02 AM
"finger tips that track the cheeks of his sentiment" Nice.
Loving Iii Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 5:17 AM
I can relate.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 7:26 PM
Oh my! This is very moving Harry. A great portrayal of the love that resides in your heart.
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February 15, 2013 at 9:49 AM
It's a fantastic magic of words penned where there's nice game of love. You can bind sweet feelings in words, you are an expert master to do that I know. Thanks for your kind comment, my sweet friend. Loved always, bl
Ryerson Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 7:01 AM
Oh yes Harry...'Lips to kiss away a tear of a mighty man'...can't be put any better than that...have a good one my friend - Tim
A   Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 8:32 PM
Dear Harry, a lovely image and feeling... one kiss and touch can bring the best, in new love...xox~pd
Breidenthal Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 7:16 PM
Interesting work, Harry. Very heartfelt, to see the tears of any man. Always, Laura
Wesley Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 4:40 PM
Let me dry your tears darling, I can't stand to have a sweet man like you be sad. Tomorrow will be better I promise. Love, Elizabeth
Carrillo Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 12:09 PM
Harry; This is great. A mighty man can cry too. I told you once - there is nothing wrong with that. Have a great V. Day - just don't eat too much candy. Lucilla
Manassian Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 6:47 AM
How absolutely dreamy and romantic! Wonderful write, Harry! :)
May Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 5:54 AM
very nice Tanka Harry....best wishes
Williams Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 4:08 AM
Harry... exquisite....David
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 3:44 AM
Just wonderful written, Harry - Have a sweet heart day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Hammoud Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 3:30 AM
Harry, a tear of a mighty man. Nice mix. you are a mighty guy. Looking forward to reading more of your poems. TC
Kearley Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 12:34 AM
Everything has been already said Harry.. One very fine Tanka my friend. :o)
Veetil Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 11:58 PM
This is beautiful Harry....
Harrell Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 6:05 PM
Ohh, so sweet and adorable. Love it, Harry!
Komala Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 5:31 PM
Aah this is so sweet and so nice,. I love your write dearest poet Harry...:) enjoyed so much<3 Happy Valentine my dearest one <3 :) Sk
Haick Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 4:11 PM
A simple beauty is what this Tanka is, Jack...straight from the heart. Always, Annalise
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