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Tania's New Etheree Contest ~ February 17, 2025

Etsy Kintsugi Art

heart tattered wounded soul hopes all shattered failed love has a price such an outrageous toll a burden to bear when skewed Before leaping again, think twice There's a question worthy of asking Is trusting in love again worth the risk It will bloom anew if true love is found, Chance encounter of a new romance Funny, how it happens that way suddenly, gray skies turn blue Sunlight beams golden hues With a hand to hold Life seems fulfilled Heart mended embraced Loved

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Date: 3/4/2025 6:55:00 AM
Dropping by to say congratulations on your winning work. So nice to see it in the winners' list. Way to go. I like the diamond shape created and the contrast in the situations. Sara K
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Date: 3/2/2025 5:14:00 AM
Lin, a beautiful heartfelt poem and presentation. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 2/25/2025 9:09:00 AM
Lin, love the sequence from top to bottom. That's truly how life works or worked for many of us. It's fun to read and makes me smile.
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/2/2025 4:32:00 AM
I’m grateful for the many times you’ve made me smile with your comments. Thank you, Duke.
Date: 2/17/2025 9:27:00 AM
May all hearts be mended, love your poetry, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/17/2025 10:48:00 AM
Thanks ever so much for such a fine compliment, DM.

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