A Tasty Blend

Our lips meet moistened
                                              Each others ingredient
                                                 Blends to perfection
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 21, 2012 at 10:12 PM
Michael, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD
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December 7, 2012 at 10:49 AM
a true blend this is, love this poem...
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November 29, 2012 at 9:33 PM
perfection is so hard to find these days Michael luv but your fantastic words prove there is hope .. JG in low ebb mood these days .. thankxx for my win in your great contest luv ..xoxo a million more too ,,
Guzzi Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 7:58 AM
ahhh but what does she taste like..this is senryu you can use metaphor! Light & Love
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November 28, 2012 at 7:25 AM
Michael, a romantic well done senyru, you captured the kiss beautifully, Constance
Neels Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 12:46 PM
hmmmm love the last line ;) awesome piece MJF! Love CTH
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November 27, 2012 at 3:29 AM
Oh wow...this is a gift - says it all - perfect like ying and yang - Thankyou - Shaz
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November 26, 2012 at 8:41 AM
Oooh...nice write. Little steamy..Thanks for you comments on my poem "Strength"....Hugs, Holly
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November 26, 2012 at 5:39 AM
Hunger, a basic need met; exquisitly rendered with so few words. Luv, Lizzie
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November 25, 2012 at 9:19 PM
Michael, wow perfect is.. perfect does.... one of the best senryu,,,passion at its best... always~ PD
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November 25, 2012 at 5:43 PM
I have a sudden urge for something hot, and for some reason I don't think it is coffee.
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November 25, 2012 at 8:23 AM
a delicious blend it must be, Michael!
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November 25, 2012 at 7:31 AM
A very fascinating senryu you've penned Michael! It's perfect indeed! Congrats! More power and blessings to you and your family always! love/hugs, LG
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November 24, 2012 at 10:02 AM
Perfect! That's how I feel about this wondrous poem...It's purely perfect! I am amazed at your insightful and delightful ingredients into this fine write! What a powerfully fabulous piece! Keep up the awesome poems coming, it's nice to see you back into the fray of things! This is a fantastic write, Great Work!!
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November 24, 2012 at 9:50 AM
What a tasty kiss! :D, Beautiful senryu Michael, I love the closing of this senryu, it completes its perfection :D, Thank you for your visit to my new poem, it's been a while not seeing you around, and it's a pleasure to have you back :D, wishing you the most joyful and wonderful day Michael :) - Hug, Yanny
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