Notes About The Poem

A Tapestry of Emotions

As I walk along the narrow path
Far away from the din of the city crowd
I feel the pain of sadness envelop me,
A symphony of stubborn sadness
That resides in the inner depths of my soul.

At the forest rim, a vast valley stretches.
Unknown farmers toiled on their trucks.
She will not find me at the forest’s edge.
Do I want to encounter her anew?
She is a symphony of steady, unruly moods.

I approach a farm, yet despite the summer breeze,
I find no joy nor pity, no undying love or hatred.
Sorrow lingers as indecision wrecks my peace.
I yearn for simple silence, yet in that calm around
Thoughts thunder, thriving on troubles and worry.

Can I find a warm and bright surrender to my turmoil?
My heart is like a see-saw, now up, now down.
I feel her soft lips turn into anger that knows no bounds.
What is love really like?  I want delight and happiness.
I find animosity and antipathy.  No, no.  There is also
Strong feelings of adulation, allegiance, and amity.

As fear creeps in, I knock on the farm door.
Beauty opens for my embrace.  The kiss is long.
Hope shines as we enter the warm hearth.
“Breakfast is ready, my love.”  We eat in ecstasy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kannan Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 9:47 PM
She is a symphony of steady, unruly moods.... Loved the ending!!!! Beautifully written!!!
Sands Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 5:41 AM
This is excellent. Well written and a Fav for me :)
Bayles Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 9:08 PM
Such a great depiction of desolation, followed by a great ending. It reads like romance.
Poet Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 6:09 PM
Your poem is so delightful and the picture with it is outstanding, Victor. This wonderfully crafted,poem has a joyous epilogue! Best wishes for the coming year
Hind Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 4:24 PM
Nice feelings here - I could envision your walk and search...
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 2:49 PM
This is beautiful, and I love the image you shared with your poem Victor. Love is as you have penned, sort of like lovely roses, the fragrance is heavenly and yet we have to deal witht e thorns, and even bees, it is the way of our nature as humans in this world. I am faving your poem. Happy new year!
May Avatar
January 3, 2025 at 6:58 AM
I love the ecstatic end to this write, Very nicely penned, All the bes for the New Year
George Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 9:05 PM
Beautifully written. This poem is a melange of mixed emotions. Your lovely stifling emotions of sorrow finally gave way to overwhelming feelings of love and joy. Dear Victor, your imagination is wonderful.
Buehler Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 1:31 PM
Wonderfully written, Victor! I love the way the fears were put to rest in the final verse. I enjoyed the happy ending. :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 8:52 AM
Ahhh you have a vivid imagination in this one. I noticed you are writing many romantic poems lately!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 10:50 AM
The dark ones will come soon.
Rolland Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 8:28 AM
so warm and cute, ending makes the difference for sure happy new year
Edmonds  Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 8:25 AM
Dear Victor, love is a cosy nook, shared with a warm hearted cook. Lovely poem… Beryl
Roper Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 8:01 AM
love this well written poem. Emotions moves us to different directions. Hugs Eve
Tor Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 5:45 AM
Victor your passion is always demonstrated in your Poetry. This one reminds me of my parents. Relationship are not always perfect and they are like you said. " See-Saw." Up and down and it creates worry for one of the partners. Worried of their wives reaction, her being in a state of anger. Cest La Vie my friend. No relationship is perfect. Wishing health and safety for you and your daughter. This one brought memories of my parents Victor, thanks for sharing my friend...
Gifford Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 5:40 AM
A beautiful write, very touching. Wishing you a Happy New Year and a wonderful day,Victor.
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 3:05 AM
- True love makes us feel like we're really alive, Victor... a lovely poem :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 2:43 AM
Sometimes we let our feelings get the better of us and things aren't always what they seem. Happy New year to you Victor. Tom
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