Andrea Dietrich Poet Tanka

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A Tanka For My Future

like a puffy cloud

my future floats prettily

in the azure sky

I need only picture it

drifting to my open palm

Written May 9, 2016 for the Future Contest of Nayda Ivette Negron

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Duke Beaufort May 26, 2016 at 3:39 PM You have quoted (in the picture) one of the most wonderful people ever. The image your words create is inspiring--quite a tribute created you have.

Arthur Vaso May 18, 2016 at 10:15 PM Beautiful Tanka, and liked the photo quote too!

Bl Devnath May 15, 2016 at 1:33 PM Beautiful poem on the picture of future. Said with optimistic view. Good luck my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Daver Austin May 13, 2016 at 11:48 AM A beautiful hope for the future. Colorful. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A May 13, 2016 at 2:44 AM Andrea, congrats on your win. ~LINDA~

Sara Chansarkar May 12, 2016 at 1:10 PM So short and crisp,lovely Andrea!

Joseph May May 12, 2016 at 6:19 AM Congrats on your win Andrea

Brian Davey May 12, 2016 at 1:28 AM Nice write Andrea and congrats on your placement

Mohan Chutani May 12, 2016 at 12:58 AM Andrea, a crisp write. Congrats,Mohan.

Karam Misra May 11, 2016 at 7:47 PM Very visual and apt. Loved it. Congrats on your win, Andrea! Luv ~kc~

Beautiful Scars May 11, 2016 at 1:33 PM A wonderful tanka, as always congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores May 11, 2016 at 1:26 PM Congratulations Andrea on the placement of the contest

Joanna Daniel May 11, 2016 at 7:57 AM Great tanka:) loved the way you wrote on this theme, seems effortless:)

Sara Kendrick May 11, 2016 at 7:47 AM Here's hoping that the future is a sure thing floating your way..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Wilma Neels May 11, 2016 at 7:22 AM Quite a hope filled Tanka Andrea. Haven't written a Tanka in years. All the best for the contest :)

Demetrios Trifiatis May 11, 2016 at 5:52 AM What a hopeful future it is dear, Andrea! Delightful writing and a seven!

Jan Allison May 11, 2016 at 2:50 AM Hmmmm wonder if I should re think my poem - love your take on the theme:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May May 10, 2016 at 11:11 PM Beautiful tanka Andrea...hugs

Constance La France May 10, 2016 at 9:54 PM Andrea, very nice for the contest, a lot said in a few words

Eve Roper May 10, 2016 at 8:09 PM Love your poem, you followed the instructions. I really didn't know what to write. A 7 a winner :-)