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Start Jamming Poetry Contest sponsored by Eve Roper 07/15/23

My pet giraffe is called Tiny although he is extremely tall He towers above a huge sunflower that's growing along my back wall! One day Tiny appeared to be poorly The vet climbed up a ladder to see He said Tiny had a bad infection I must make him a scarf urgently! So I busily knitted with lamb's wool My fingers worked all day and night I coiled the scarf up his long neck It was perfect and fitted just right! Tiny now wears his scarf in our garden And it's cured all the pains in his neck The vet praised me for my speedy knitting My home made remedy wasn't hi- tech! I’m thankful that Tiny is better And we go out on rambles and walks But if strangers see us out walking their eyes often pop out on stalks!

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Date: 7/24/2023 11:24:00 AM
love it love it how cute a story, and the picture heehee
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Date: 7/24/2023 8:22:00 AM
Jan, congratulations on your win.. Love the cute story . Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/24/2023 5:36:00 AM
Very unique writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/24/2023 4:04:00 AM
So intertaining and quite funny story. I love it and enjoyed so much. Congratulations on your win my dear poet friend! Thanks for sharing. Blessings always. Hugs
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Date: 7/17/2023 12:15:00 PM
tale being told---that is. phyl
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Date: 7/17/2023 12:14:00 PM
Enjoy the tale of told Jan. Seen your name and just had to drop a hello and hope all is well with you. love phyl
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Date: 7/15/2023 4:41:00 PM
Being in my 3rd childhood, Jan, I really enjoy the fun poems you right for us children. :-) Bill
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/16/2023 1:47:00 AM
lol Bill I write poems suitable for 'kids' of all ages lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/15/2023 2:46:00 PM
this is adorable, jan!
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Date: 7/16/2023 1:46:00 AM
Thanks Ilene, I do enjoy writing poems for the little ones:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/15/2023 11:24:00 AM
- Tiny is really a cute pet… (I am envious of his thick and long eyelashes :) ... so good that he recovered quickly - A lovely poem, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 7/15/2023 2:16:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise hugs jan xx
Date: 7/15/2023 11:13:00 AM
Jan, you have such a vivid imagination and a delightful storytelling style. I'm smiling at the thought of you and Tiny going for a walk in the neighborhood with his lo-tech scarf in place! Just love your poetic gifts. Hugs ~ John
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/15/2023 2:15:00 PM
Thanks so much John I do enjoy writing fun poems for children-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/15/2023 8:37:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/15/2023 9:58:00 AM
Thanks so much hugs jan x

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