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A Tale To Tell

An old stone cottage stands on the seafront Abandoned and alone Windows covered in sea salt and cobwebs Its history and story unknown A small white cottage with good bones That has weathered many a storm Now unloved and neglected Still stands steadfast ,proud, yet sadly forlorn A large stone fireplace graces the front room Blackened by the years that have withstood the test of time Giving warmth and comfort to many a soul Comfort so sublime I wonder who resided here Was it a happy home Was it alive , full of love and laughter Or harbouring sadness and secrets unknown I would love to sit inside this cottage Light the fire and share a cup of tea So the cottage could tell me its story Of life as it used to be A story perhaps of long lost secrets One of intrigue and mystery Or maybe just a simple tale Of a loving family In appreciation and gratitude for story told A cuddle it would be I would visit time and again for the warmth of its fire And to share another cup of tea!

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Date: 10/9/2024 8:17:00 AM
Dear Deb, What a delightful journey through the mystery of this house. Every word kept me captivated and here is my favorite lines. "I would love to sit inside this cottage Light the fire and share a cup of tea So the cottage could tell me its story Of life as it used to be." Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 10/9/2024 11:58:00 AM
Hi Daniel….glad you enjoyed and always appreciate your thoughts and support! Debx
Date: 10/8/2024 9:30:00 AM
Ooh, I would want to go too. Lovely story, nicely written.
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Date: 10/9/2024 11:56:00 AM
Thanks Alesia l appreciate your thoughts and lovely comment! Debx
Date: 10/8/2024 12:50:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem and a fave for me! Enjoyed reading!
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Date: 10/9/2024 11:55:00 AM
Thankyou Daisy especially for the fave …..that is very special and l appreciate greatly! Debx
Date: 10/7/2024 8:12:00 PM
Very inviting poetry, Deb. I like the rhyme and flow. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 10/9/2024 11:57:00 AM
Thanks my Texan buddy….glad you are back! Debx
Date: 10/7/2024 1:10:00 PM
Old cottages need love. I'd love to see it. This is a dreamy poem with a lot of good wishes.
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Date: 10/9/2024 12:00:00 PM
Yes they do need love Hilda and its sad to see them neglected and empty! Thankyou friend! Debx
Date: 10/7/2024 10:42:00 AM
What a wonderful voyage into nostalgia and mystery, Deb. You craft an amazing picture of abandonment but never losing sight of the story. Wonderful metaphor for those "houses" that are also abandoned. Enjoyed this very much and left me wanting to know "the rest of the story." Blessings to you.
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Date: 10/7/2024 11:05:00 AM
Hi Sam....what a lovely comment which l greatly appreciate. I am so happy you liked it. I would love to hear all the tales that lovely stone cottage had to tell but alas Ha! Thankyou...Debx
Date: 10/7/2024 7:28:00 AM
Deb, I enjoyed your abandoned cottage tale.
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Date: 10/7/2024 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Tania….much appreciated! Debx
Date: 10/6/2024 4:03:00 PM
Thoroughly enjoyed this, Deb. I’m always intrigued by empty/deserted houses seemingly crying out for a family to call it home… and yet, desolate. Hiw does tgat come to pass. Nicely conveyed imagery. Great to see you back. Terry
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Date: 10/7/2024 3:56:00 AM
I know Terry especially in the U.K…..beautifully crafted old gorgeous homes just left empty….l too do not understand it and always wonder what their story is! Thankyou my lovely funny friend! Debx
Date: 10/6/2024 10:05:00 AM
You really created a picture of the image thought you words and wonderful poem..
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Date: 10/7/2024 3:42:00 AM
Thankyou S.O….l appreciate you dropping by. Hope you are doing ok! Debx
Date: 10/6/2024 5:53:00 AM
Deb, with the wonderfully vivid imagery you have created here, it's so easy to imagine that I could be there with you! I love old cottages and their stories. It reads like an old black and white movie that's watched year after year! Happy Sunday xxoo
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Date: 10/7/2024 3:53:00 AM
Mike ,l just love and appreciate your comment…so feel good….so thankyou!.l thought you would love old cottages and their stories just like me! Debx
Date: 10/6/2024 5:04:00 AM
Gee, how moving this is~ i think you should buy this lonely cottage, ! bet its walls has stories to tell! Thau whisper, when the sun goes down. A most moving write, Deb, Love, Pangie
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Date: 10/7/2024 3:49:00 AM
Oh l am so glad you were moved Pangie that makes me happy! Can you imagine some of the stories and secrets it might share….mystery, affairs, murder haha ….now l am getting totally carried away! Thanks my lovely friend! Debx
Date: 10/6/2024 4:26:00 AM
A cottage full of memories I wonder what stories it could reveal. Nice one Deb.
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Date: 10/7/2024 3:45:00 AM
I know John it would be so interesting! Thanks….Debx
Date: 10/6/2024 4:02:00 AM
I love cottages. Great descriptions that lures the reader to spend time there, cuddling away..
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Date: 10/7/2024 3:43:00 AM
Thanks Victor….cuddles right back at ya! Ha….always a pleasure Victor….Debx
Date: 10/6/2024 3:39:00 AM
Deb, your descriptive write allowed me to see myself sitting there with you in that cottage, enjoying tea, the sights and sounds of the ocean, and sharing the friendship we've made.
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Date: 10/6/2024 9:05:00 AM
I will bring the bolt cutters hehe!!
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Date: 10/6/2024 3:51:00 AM
Tell me where and when, and I'll bring the tea!
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Date: 10/6/2024 3:50:00 AM
Oh that would be just lovely Lin but we would have to break in….are you up for that l am!! Haha sit by the raging fire sharing our lives….Alas!! Thanks my friend….Debx
Date: 10/6/2024 1:19:00 AM
If only it could talk, what a treasure trove of history it could tell you. Tom
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Date: 10/6/2024 1:38:00 AM
Wouldn’t that be wonderful Tom! Thanks….Debx
Date: 10/5/2024 11:32:00 PM
Brings me memories, beautiful poetry!
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Date: 10/6/2024 1:39:00 AM
Aww thanks Arthur! Debx
Date: 10/5/2024 4:04:00 PM
Hello Deb M., i would like to see that cottage. It is interesting to me. kit probably has a history that is interesting to see. /Darlene/x Hugs.
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Date: 10/6/2024 7:37:00 AM
Hello Deb M. I wonder what it would look like. it would be interesting to see. Your welcome my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 10/6/2024 1:42:00 AM
Hello sweet Darlene…..yes it would be very interesting! Thanks my friend! Debx

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