A Tale of Vampirates

Busy reading a curious series 
Wrapped in the fantasy 
Written within it's covers
A story of Vampirates

A complex tale of lives entwined 
Destiny shaped before life 
Journeys embarked upon
While sailing the open seas

Set in a time ahead of now 
Throughout the past plays it's part
Challenges faced by siblings divided
Worlds apart their loyalties tried

Enchanting descriptions of a world apart
Removed from reality
Still within its embrace
An epic tale of adventure

Thousands of pages
To tell its full tale
A beautiful story
An original, truly one of a kind

Wanting the story to continue 
For the characters journeys 
To not be through
To pick up where we left off

Sailing through the seas
In search of answers
Of treasure 
And more

Twins who were once sheltered 
Exposed to untold dangers
Denied the truth
To who they are

Centuries of time 
Riddled with tales 
Of more than just the twins 
Conner and Grace

But alas the tale is done
With their unusual stories
Left swinging in limbo
So onto the next one

Written by:  Shannon Deane
Written:  June 9th, 2011
Contest:  Sea Of Words

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/8/2011 1:42:00 PM
* "TELL ME MORE OF THIS TALE MY SWEET LUV * KISSSS MY LIPS * SOFTLY * DEEEPLY * MAKE ME YOURS *.* HAPPY HOLIDAYS SWEET BEAUTIFUL SHANNON * MY BELOVED * FOREVER & ALWAYS * 'YOUR SARAH!!'" *
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Date: 11/19/2011 8:09:00 PM
Smile ~ Tis always such a wonderful joy, whenever I Am paid a kind visit from your lovely precious beauty my dear ~ I too, as many others I Am quite certain, find myself drawn to this sweetnes * Wishing for but one taste...."Ahhhh" ~ My love to Your Beauty always & forever, John!:) ~
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Date: 11/16/2011 1:17:00 PM
Shannon this is a stunningly good epic, loved it..David
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Date: 11/4/2011 7:10:00 AM
* “Good Morning My Beautiful Sweet & More Than Beautiful Shannon * Still Waiting for Your Beauties Loving Bite *.* I Hope That Your Perfect Beauty Is Doing Wonderfully * My Luv, Always & Forever * Your Sarah.” *
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Date: 11/1/2011 2:09:00 PM
* “Owww * I Shall Probably Be Returning Unto This Sweetened Thought In Verse Quite A Bit * My Dear Beautiful & Sooo Much More Than Beautiful, `Beautiful Shannon` * Just to Offer Your Sweetness * My Warmth That You May Feed * `My Luv,` Always * Sarah.” *
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Date: 10/30/2011 6:28:00 AM
* Ps. * “I Loved Your Gripping, to Hold Beautiful Comments * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Shannon * Sooo Much Sooo That I Shall Say This Again In A Whisper, Here's My Neck, Bite It, I'm Yours *.* Thank You ~ Made My Heart Flutter Like A Butterfly, Swirling & Twirling Inside Your Beautiful Words * I Shall Be Back In A Bit to Visit Your Beautiful Treasures * Happy Holidays * My Luv, Always, Sarah.” *
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Date: 10/29/2011 8:28:00 AM
* “Undoing My Negligee * Exposing My Deep Desires Unto Sweet Beauty * Bite Me Beautiful Shannon * Make Me Yours * Smile, Just Kidding? * Wonderful Journey My Beautiful Lady * Luv * Sarah.” *
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Date: 7/12/2011 6:55:00 AM
What a wonderous tale, so intriguing, a winner to me, and thanks so much for your kind words on my poetry, I appreciate that so much~~
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Date: 7/11/2011 12:55:00 PM
well written, such drama, kept you going till the end.
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Date: 7/11/2011 7:46:00 AM
oi! I love this... wow!.. what a tale... and keeper... and also thanks for the hi! while i was on vacation... now my new poem needs opinions..lol.. its lame! but, i am still fresh minded.. take care,..p.d.
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Date: 7/7/2011 5:12:00 AM
this was a great piece nicely done good luck in the contest. cory
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Date: 7/6/2011 3:24:00 PM
McWow Shannon, this reads like the narrative intro to a horror movie. Way to go with this fine piece. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 7/6/2011 8:54:00 AM
Super intense piece Shannon and full of magical moments and vampire stories always intrigue me ..am fascinated with the theory of this species ..u have expressed so beautifully for the contest ..good luck..and thankxx so very much for all your wonderful sweet comments reading so much of my poetry ..glad u enjoyed ..always welcome luv..
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Date: 7/1/2011 12:32:00 PM
Sorry forgot to rate it. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2011 12:31:00 PM
Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Shannon. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend and that you find miles of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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