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A Tale of Love and Loss

**************** since my youth I’ve been motivated by passionate reveries that the very essence of my soul sees- family and friends seeking only kindness from me, as I pay love forward ten times more once, two roads forked into unknown paths and with all my strength I followed the grey horizon, then gifts flowing from my hands began to heal- a tale of love and loss my life has written; **wife ~ mother ~ writer ~ artist** ************************** Story of My Life in Ten Lines Contest September 27, 2019

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Date: 10/6/2019 12:02:00 PM
- Congratulations L.L., on your 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2019 4:08:00 PM
A deep and honest take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/4/2019 6:20:00 PM
Thank you!! I am honored you like my poem. Hope all is well with you. :)-luloo
Date: 9/28/2019 12:33:00 PM
Wonderful write, Laura, you turned into a wonderful writer and so much more!
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/4/2019 6:19:00 PM
Thank you so much dear John you never cease to amaze me with your poetry and kindness. Be blessed:)-luloo
Date: 9/28/2019 2:30:00 AM
In ten lines, you have captured yourself and shown us how lovely you are, Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/4/2019 6:17:00 PM
Thank you sweet Care Bear. ( I've always wanted to say that to you I hope it's okay) hugs:)-luloo
Date: 9/27/2019 9:48:00 PM
This is so beautiful... You are many, many things that are wise and wonderful. Bless you always.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/4/2019 6:10:00 PM
Awww thank you so much, you are so nice :)-luloo
Date: 9/27/2019 9:36:00 PM
i love everything about this my friend...the way the poem is formed, the content within and the outcome of life, that shaped beautiful you ...great poem :) hugs
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/4/2019 6:09:00 PM
Thank you sweet lady, you always know how to make me smile. :)-luloo

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