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William Bonny AKA Billy The Kid A Tale Of Billy The Kid By Robert Gorelick “Quien esta?” Bang! It’s over, you’re a legend now, Billy. Born in Hell’s Kitchen in ramshackle consumptive squalor, New York’s crammed gang infected rat-infested shacks and alleys. Amid the iniquitous stench of rot and the soul’s decay, in a nation at war, pulling, stretching, ripping to shreds the frayed fabric of its precarious union. An abused juvenile fleeing west emerging from the muck to where a soul and body may heal, breathe deeply, expand. At last—life New Mexico territory spreads open and wide, easy to be seduced by cynical range-war ranchers’ welcome greetings they pay you well for every cattle rustled, then desert you as you flee the sheriff’s posse. “Quien esta?” With a concealed knife you stab a drunken gambler, self-defense is no excuse as the ruffian had important friends. You’re set to hang, Billy in a daring display you shoot your way out, steal a horse and gallop off to your woodland shanty. Midnight, your shack’s pitch dark, there’s breathing nearby, your Mexican novia? Why doesn’t she speak? “Quien esta?” Bang. Pat Garrett guns you down. A throw away kid from big city squalor, becomes a legend of the wild west. You’re a legend, Billy 1/8/23 Metrical Tale Contest Sponsor: Hilo Poet

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Date: 1/22/2023 5:43:00 AM
I have always been fascinated by the stories from the American West and the early days of Australian bushrangers. They lived fast and died young. Enjoyed reading it Rob. Best, SuZ
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/22/2023 5:54:00 PM
We have our memories to fall back on. Mind me platypus duck. Ha ha SuZ
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/22/2023 11:23:00 AM
Unfortunately, I'm living slow and dying old, would gladly trade places. Thank you SuZ, set me wallaby free, Lee!
Date: 1/21/2023 12:49:00 PM
what a fast and tragic life he had. I would have said he finished up his spiritual life early but not so certain in this case. Thanks for the history lesson. Well written and enjoyed it. Nancy
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Date: 1/21/2023 12:48:00 PM
what a fast and tragic life he had. I would have said he finished up his spiritual life early but not so certain in this case. Thanks for the history lesson. Well written and enjoyed it. Nancy
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/21/2023 3:04:00 PM
A harsh life led to little spiritual sensitivity. Thank you for your visits, Robert
Date: 1/20/2023 2:24:00 PM
I like the way this legend flows; bold imagery penned with feeling for Billy's mistakes. Such a wasted life. Well done.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/21/2023 3:02:00 PM
Thank you, ML Kiser!
Date: 1/13/2023 9:01:00 AM
I love your style of writing and the vivid imagery in this poem. Best of luck for the contest:-)
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/13/2023 4:05:00 PM
Honored that you appreciate my work, Ranaditya! Robert
Date: 1/11/2023 10:29:00 PM
Awesome write Robert ! Loved your use of language , keeping the stage and mystery pulsating throughout ! You brought Billy alive in all of his stench and glory. A fav ! Cheers. Susan :)
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/12/2023 2:16:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, you're right it felt as if I could smell Billy on and his horse riding through the New Mexican Badlands! Thanks for the fav. Robert
Date: 1/11/2023 1:50:00 PM
Love this one Robert being a big fan of the old west, his real name was Henry Mccarthy and he changed his name to William Bonney, probably to confuse the law that was on his tail. A ruthless killer and thief he got what was coming for him. A fave for me. Tom
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/11/2023 4:27:00 PM
Once again as a meticulous historian you pay attention to detail. Thank you for the fav. Tom, hope you're doing well! Wrangler Rob
Date: 1/11/2023 12:45:00 PM
Love this Robert, a fantastic rendition of "Billy The Kid" Good luck in the contest! A fave.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/11/2023 12:59:00 PM
Thank you, Anaya for the fav. and visit! Robert
Date: 1/10/2023 8:56:00 AM
Robert this is definitely one of the best Poetic stories I have read in a long while. Your words depicting where he came from and using that analogy to convey who he is and turned out to be (scum) is a great effort to get us to know him. The Spanish usage repeating "Quien esta." reflects the question that exposes him to Garret as he hones in his gun on him and kills him. Also "Novia" which is girlfriend. Love how you used the spanish language Robert. This is POTD material my friend and a fav...
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 1/11/2023 12:58:00 PM
Thank you, Michael learning about Billy the kid was an eye opener as well. It's a shame that popular culture had never bothered to engage in the facts of old wild west legends, they didn't just appear out of nowhere as yahoo cowboys. Thanks for the fav. and the grade! Robert
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Michael Tor
Date: 1/10/2023 9:01:00 AM
from me. I just love everything about it. Your historical depiction is spot on. Your creative ability really shines in this one Robert I have to say again the analogy of Hell's Kitchen really sublimaly set the tone and in away it formed this scummy relationship to him as individual. Clever and unique how you conveyed Robert. A Big. Big Favorite. I read it over four times just to savor it's content... A+++++!!!!!!

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