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A Tail of a Different Rhyme

There is a tail that has no rhyme One that has not reason or chime Just follows close behind Good one shows all great emotion Position can cause commotion If evil mood inclined

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Sean Claudine

Date: 1/5/2012 9:02:00 AM

you have eyes "mia cara" and you choose to see, you see beauty in darkest where the rest remain blinded. seeking yet having not the eyes to see, their vision is clouded with ire and pride. they claim title SUPERIOR these lords of earth yet remain even greater slaves, ignorant of their hopeless plight. thank you

Judy Ball

Date: 8/11/2011 2:01:00 PM

This is really cute Sara. Made me smile. God Bless, JB

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/9/2011 1:43:00 PM

Clever verse Sara, need to have this as a fav!

Robert Johnson

Date: 8/8/2011 10:04:00 AM

When they wag, they show such joy. When jumping up on every girl and boy. But when they stiffen with ire demeanor. The other side of the street looks greener.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 8/3/2011 10:13:00 AM

Nice, goodluck, jag

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 8/3/2011 10:09:00 AM

Nicely done. The short rhyme can hit with great impact. I assume this is for the contest? Good luck, Sara.

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 8/2/2011 8:57:00 PM

Love the title and the rhyme scheme explanation. Thanks for the kind comments. Blessings, Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/2/2011 6:03:00 PM

Nice thought well expressed with this tail-rhyme, Sara