A Tail of a Different Rhyme

There is a tail that has no rhyme
One that has not reason or chime
Just follows close behind 

Good one shows all great emotion
Position can cause commotion
If evil mood inclined
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Claudine Avatar
January 5, 2012 at 9:02 AM
you have eyes "mia cara" and you choose to see, you see beauty in darkest where the rest remain blinded. seeking yet having not the eyes to see, their vision is clouded with ire and pride. they claim title SUPERIOR these lords of earth yet remain even greater slaves, ignorant of their hopeless plight. thank you
Ball Avatar
August 11, 2011 at 2:01 PM
This is really cute Sara. Made me smile. God Bless, JB
Wesley Avatar
August 9, 2011 at 1:43 PM
Clever verse Sara, need to have this as a fav!
Johnson Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 10:04 AM
When they wag, they show such joy. When jumping up on every girl and boy. But when they stiffen with ire demeanor. The other side of the street looks greener.
Nair Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 10:13 AM
Nice, goodluck, jag
Zzzzz Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 10:09 AM
Nicely done. The short rhyme can hit with great impact. I assume this is for the contest? Good luck, Sara.
Ramsdale Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 8:57 PM
Love the title and the rhyme scheme explanation. Thanks for the kind comments. Blessings, Caryl
Mehta Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 6:03 PM
Nice thought well expressed with this tail-rhyme, Sara
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