A Tail of a Different Rhyme

There is a tail that has no rhyme
One that has not reason or chime
Just follows close behind 

Good one shows all great emotion
Position can cause commotion
If evil mood inclined

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/5/2012 9:02:00 AM
you have eyes "mia cara" and you choose to see, you see beauty in darkest where the rest remain blinded. seeking yet having not the eyes to see, their vision is clouded with ire and pride. they claim title SUPERIOR these lords of earth yet remain even greater slaves, ignorant of their hopeless plight. thank you
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Date: 8/11/2011 2:01:00 PM
This is really cute Sara. Made me smile. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/9/2011 1:43:00 PM
Clever verse Sara, need to have this as a fav!
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Date: 8/8/2011 10:04:00 AM
When they wag, they show such joy. When jumping up on every girl and boy. But when they stiffen with ire demeanor. The other side of the street looks greener.
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Date: 8/3/2011 10:13:00 AM
Nice, goodluck, jag
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Date: 8/3/2011 10:09:00 AM
Nicely done. The short rhyme can hit with great impact. I assume this is for the contest? Good luck, Sara.
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Date: 8/2/2011 8:57:00 PM
Love the title and the rhyme scheme explanation. Thanks for the kind comments. Blessings, Caryl
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Date: 8/2/2011 6:03:00 PM
Nice thought well expressed with this tail-rhyme, Sara
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