A Swim In the Street

When the stars blaze a halo rim
around the noon-day sun
it is time, time for a swim.
The street lights have gone to the gym.

Mr. Harry Tomdick chose the street
and brought tick tocks for each heat.
I wore my frilly pajamas
but we forgot the gloves for our feet.

We smelled the butterflies' joke
about those young day crawlers
who had no small heat soak
from dog-paddling in the smoke.

The stars are now falling on the midway
Traffic lights blink pink and blue - Swim On -
while sparks of ice drop from the sun's ray.
Tempus fugit - forever and a day.


September 7, 2021

Sponsor	charles messina
Contest Name	Nonsense Rhyme

Like the final stanza of a villanelle, this tomfoolery uses the opposite rhyme scheme of a rubaiyat - BABB.
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October 26, 2021 at 9:33 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem, Reason , silly and enjoying read. Hugs Eve
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October 29, 2021 at 3:52 AM
Thanks Eve, sometimes it scares me to think what the human mind can conceive. Like dreams which make perfect sense until we wake up to reality. Where is that fine line that divides us from falling off the edge never to return? Glad you enjoyed my silliness.
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October 26, 2021 at 6:04 AM
Very witty, Reason. Enjoyed reading this whimsical poem. Congratulations on your placement...Best wishes, Charlie
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October 29, 2021 at 3:56 AM
Good contest, Charlie. Lewis Carroll and Dr. Seuss have always fascinated me along with C S Lewis's Narnia tales which are on a slightly higher level in my opinion. Appreciate the placement as always. Have a super next write.
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