A Swath of Gold

A gleaming swath of gold appears
When I look down below.
From here, not one thing interferes
With Nature’s autumn show.

For down 9 stories, there are trees
With dazzling yellow leaves,
Though there are never guarantees,
Despite what one believes,

That year to year that lovely view
Will be exactly thus,
Since sometimes when a storm’s a‘brew,
There’s nothing to discuss.

When wind and rain join forces, they
May strip those branches bare
And we don’t have the slightest say
To keep that yellow there.

Yet this time, we’ve been sent a gift,
For every window glance
Gives me a cause to smile, a lift
That Nature sometimes grants.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Flood Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 3:44 PM
A smashing illustration, Ilene. Our autumn leaves seem to be hanging on for dear life this year… but I think they’re about to lose the battle… judging by the state of my lawn ;-)
Turner Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 3:22 AM
A gift indeed, Ilene. I simply can't imagine living in a city. I love being surrounded by nature. There seems to be always something going on. Great rhyme as usual. Be well:)
Rolland Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 12:53 AM
delicate and beautiful scenery from the nine story, surprising poem , so enjoyable, thanks Ilene
Pick Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 9:00 PM
Nice poem Ilene it's good to count our blessings while we can thanks, regards Les.
Wolf Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 6:52 PM
How nice, Ilene. By the way, we've just had a winter storm in Chicago that's NO DOUBT headed right your way. So much for treats, gifts, and all that good stuff...
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