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A Swath of Gold

A gleaming swath of gold appears When I look down below. From here, not one thing interferes With Nature’s autumn show. For down 9 stories, there are trees With dazzling yellow leaves, Though there are never guarantees, Despite what one believes, That year to year that lovely view Will be exactly thus, Since sometimes when a storm’s a‘brew, There’s nothing to discuss. When wind and rain join forces, they May strip those branches bare And we don’t have the slightest say To keep that yellow there. Yet this time, we’ve been sent a gift, For every window glance Gives me a cause to smile, a lift That Nature sometimes grants.

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Date: 11/27/2023 3:44:00 PM
A smashing illustration, Ilene. Our autumn leaves seem to be hanging on for dear life this year… but I think they’re about to lose the battle… judging by the state of my lawn ;-)
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Date: 11/27/2023 3:22:00 AM
A gift indeed, Ilene. I simply can't imagine living in a city. I love being surrounded by nature. There seems to be always something going on. Great rhyme as usual. Be well:)
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Date: 11/27/2023 12:53:00 AM
delicate and beautiful scenery from the nine story, surprising poem , so enjoyable, thanks Ilene
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Date: 11/26/2023 9:00:00 PM
Nice poem Ilene it's good to count our blessings while we can thanks, regards Les.
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Date: 11/26/2023 6:52:00 PM
How nice, Ilene. By the way, we've just had a winter storm in Chicago that's NO DOUBT headed right your way. So much for treats, gifts, and all that good stuff...
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